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for Strange Allies

by Nephthys

person moxie
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naughty. naughty. naught. what a satisfying story! love it so far. can't wait for more, more, MORE!
person Sandra V
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, two more wonderful chapters! :) I was about to use the review function once again to give you a friendly little update reminder (aka kick you in the ***, lol!), but you beat me to it.

I find it hard to review your stories without repeating myself, but I think you know by now how much I like your style and pace of writing as well as the way you set up your stories and take your time to develop your characters.

This story is developing just in the right direction and I have to admit I love the fact we are going to have a little bit of heal & care in it now, I am looking forward very much to see what you are going to do with that.

Oh, and did I mention Haldir is adorable? A bastard, yet, but totally adorable? ;) And I still love the way we get both characters' POV and are able to see into their heads. I normally don't like that, but in this case it really works wonderfully.

Thanks for updating and keep up the great work, girl! :)
person Rose Atlee
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sadistic laugh* You are soooooo incredibly evil! I love this story almost as much as I loved "Between Friends". But then, that story is over and this one is just getting on it's way.... Keep up the good work!
person Sandra V
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll leave my review in the book section this time! :)

"Perhaps he would try and convince her that since Legolas had them both they should have each other. Just to close the circle, as it were."

*snorts* MALE LOGIC. I rest my case, lol!

You really are a wonderful storyteller and I love how you slowly set up the plos for those two. The way the sensual tension between them is growing, the way you allow us to look into both of their minds, to see their doubts, their motives, their fears, their desires is just masterfully subtle. And yes, Haldir is an arrogant bastard, but a yummy sexy beast as well and oh how we love him for it! *grins*

Please keep up your wonderful work, I cannot think of a single thing I would change about the story so far (and with me... that means a lot, lol!).
person Sandra V
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am sorry, I didn't realize your new story was up already! My god the end of chapter three was ever so priceless, what a way to end that one! Haldir is such a - dare I say it? - bastard and oh, how I love him for it. *g*

I am one happy camper to see you did go through with the sequel as promised. Great work so far, lady, now keep the updates coming! :)
person Nora
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....wonder what's going to happen next. I can't wait to find out. Please update soon.
P.S. I love your story so far (with the wicked Marchwarden).