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by Nephthys

person MarzBar
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP!! His Hawtiness has finally gotten what he wanted; or has he? He may not really be on top here (WEG) and she may be the boss. That was so juicy I gotta go smoke now. Hope this site stays up long enough for more. Could we get more tomorrow?
person Rose Atlee
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooohoo! Quick updates are nice! *jumps around, yelling* FIGHT, FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! Nothing like some good ol' starts-out-as-angry-and-leads-to-more-twists sex! C'mon, you know you want to! *grins*

Okay, okay, I'll give a real review! These two chapters were awesome! Lots of tension build up, seemingly setting up for the next bout of lovin'! I shall be waiting with baited breath for the next chapters! Great job!
person MarzBar
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haldir is actually pissing me off!! Why is making her feel like she has to choose? I thought that the relationships involved should no longer be a competition. Poor dear, she also needs to be able to separate lust and love and maybe have some fun (WEG). I know, I'm probably as horrible as Haldir; I just don't want her to have to make a choice between the two beautiful blondes.
person Crecy
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOo...interesting... PLEASE update soon!
person rose atlee
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi hi! Sorry it took me so long to get back, read, and now review (finally). Reality overtook me and I almost drowned. I had to read, what, 5 or 6 chapters to catch up? *Rubs sleepy eyes* This is great! I'm loving the depth that you're giving them, and Annowe's father's advice was very, very good - so good that it got me thinking... but enough of that... Keep up the great work! I look forward with great anticipation to see what choice she makes, and where this journey will end up!
person MarzBar
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo!! Do I sense some hot Haldir smut coming up (pun intended)? The lovely water nymph is an interesting creature and my filthy mind is hoping she will explore her nature with the wicked March Warden. Keep writing!

person MarzBar
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sad. I know he has been wicked and selfish but he must actually love them both. I will keep my hopes up and continue to look for more of this story. And, no matter how wicked Haldir has been, I continue to lust after him desperately.
person Nora
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT???!!!!! Noooooooo....Haldir's time on Middle Earth done? Please say it isn't so. ;(
person MarzBar
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. Thank you so much for saving the wicked Haldir. Our water nymph has been one luck lady; Legolas and Haldir! Naughty and nice, who could ask for more?
person Crecy
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* What do you mean his time in middle earth is done!? PLEASE update soon! I'm really glad he's okay (Well, okay as he could get at the moment from a wound like that, lol.) When will lthey meet up again? Weeeelll... guess I'll stay to find out!