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for Strange Allies

by Nephthys

person Maria
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this site and this story a couple of days ago. I hadn't reviewed earlier because I couldn't. Why? Because I was to busy drooling and slurping at this very romantic but *Hawt* story.. I couldn't pry my eyes off the computer screen except in an emergency. Like: Eating, going to the bathroom, sort of sleeping, changing my underwear several times because of this story, using several bibs from drooling! Nothing too serious. I enjoyed this story from beginning to end. Thanks.
person Cassia
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you think that you'll make a sequel to this story? I would greatly love to read a follow-up to this.
person MarzBar
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending with Haldir indulging himself with fantasies about Legolas' return to Valinor. He just never gives up. Thaank you so much for the fun and smutty story. Thank his wickedness from me, too.
person aragorndreamer
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BOOO WHOOO!!! It's done, waaaaaaa!!! I really enjoyed your story. It saddens me that it's over, but hey you did leave off at a good place to start another story if you choose. Just think Legolas joining them in Valor, maybe with another Elf. A 4 some yummy, LOL.
Well I'll read when muses attacks. After that I'll have to find someone elses work to read. I hope I can find one as good as your writing.
Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.
Good luck with what ever you do, and no that you do have fans out here just waiting for MORE!
person aragorndreamer
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapters!!! I love your writing. I can hardly wait for the two of them to be together again. I know the end is coming and I will be lost. Yoy said you will take a break after you finesh this story. I was wondering if you know what the next story may be about? I've read all your stories except When Muses Attacks. I will read that one when this one is over and wait for you to write a new story. Thank You for sharing you talent with me (us).
person MarzBar
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the updates. I felt so bad for you authors having to repost so much of your stories. Thank you for doing that and even more for more Haldir and Annowe. I hope he can wait for her now. He is still so arrogant with the internal chatter about how much he had given her. There is no end to his wickedness and haughtiness. Don't tell him I said that, it may discourage him from tormenting you to write about him. WEG
person MarzBar
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope she can get to him in time to go with him to Valinor. Maybe her sister can travel slowiy with his Wickedness so Annowe can catch up to them. I don't remember what I wrote for my previous review for this chapter but I hope this one will do. Nasty crashes.
person Joliesal
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow -- I've been reading this story against my will also -- I hated what Annowe and Haldir were doing to Legolas, hated the way Haldir constantly put him down and hated the way Annowe thoughtlessly betrayed the one she loved so much just for a good lay. As a previous reviewer stated, so much better than I have, I hate this story but have to read it because it is so well written.

I'm so happy to see that Annowe realizes at last that saving Middle Earth is a bit more important than making out with your girlfriend, and that she sees the extent of Legolas' knowledge of what he was giving up to do what must be done. It would make me even happier if Haldir had the same epiphany, and if Annowe and Halder would acknowledge the depth of their selfishness and use that understanding to grow into better individuals. I'm a sucker for redemption stories.

I'd be even happier if Legolas would meet a lovely elleth who would love him truly and help him deal with his broken heart and the terrible things he has witnessed in this war at the end of your tale. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, too. Thanks for this beautiful story.

person MarzBar
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Our nymph better hurry back to Haldir and get him to the ship! Can she go with him? More please.
person aragorndreamer
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!!