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by Nephthys

person Naira
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-is confuzzled-
person Sandra V
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review for the last few chapters but my appendix decided that now (as in "bloody heatwave in Europe"-now!) was a good time to say goodbye to me which is why I had to stay at the hospital for some time. The good thing about it was I had lots of chapters to catch up with when I was better. The bad thing was while the story gets even better and better (though I thought that was close to impossible as it was already perfect) things are getting worse and worse. Honestly, those two break my heart. Yes, I know I told you before as I have told you other things a thousand times before, but I am running out of nice things to say, lol, particularly since English is not my first or even my second or third language. So if you want me to review in some other languages... *grins* No, not really.

But what do mean you have never heard the words "poor Haldir" in one line before? I am ALL for "POOR HALDIR"!!! In fact ever since it became evident how he feels I have been much more fussing and crying over him then her. As a matter of fact I find him, the arrogant, horny, conceited and self-centered bastard to be surprisingly unselfish and lovable - in a way he is much more unselfish than her. If you can work on his little character dents just a LITTLE more... you know the ones: The moods and the sulkiness and the refusal of Ray Charles... If you manage THAT I will gladly take him off your hands and take him all for myself. I am sure my husband wouldn't mind. *veg*

I don't know how often I can tell you before you start hitting me but this story is so wonderful. I came to realize that one of the reasons you are able to create such beauty and magic here is the fact that you are truly and deeply in love with your characters and it shows.

*sigh*

Can't there be a happy end for those two? I am sure there won't but still...

*sighs again and starts stockpiling tissues for the final chapters*
person Sandra V
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S.:

Forgot to mention this: To all those who still cannot bring themselves to adore the Wicked One... remember girls: The bad guy always gets the girl, tehe! :D

And to say it with a slightly altered line taken from a song by Billy Joel: "I may be a bad boy... but I make a good man... *delete-delete-delete* ... ELF!"
person Michelle
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I can't wait to find out what happens. *bites nails nervously*

Will Annowe come back? Well...I guess he HAS to come back, right? Ooooo, she wouldn't just leave and never come back, would she? So many questions, so many questions...

I hope she doesn't break poor Haldir's heart.

I wonder what Tom knows. He seems very wise, and has a very curious disposition. I hope he knows something *GOOD* and not something bad. LOL!!

Wonderful job! I can't wait to read your next chapter :D

Michelle...
person Naira
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....I am not sure if I like where this is going...but I love the update :D

*bites lip not commenting about Haldir but can't resist*

He's back to himself...with the manipulating magic thingies :p
person Naira
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applauds Haldir* Admitting you have a problem is the first step to solving it :p

Still don't want him...Nope :p

hahaha anyhow, lovely update
person Rose Atlee
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoooo boy! It starts already. *sighs heavily* Poor Annowe! Poor Haldir! (though I gladly offer any such 'comfort' as he might desire!) There are choices to be made, things to be said, and much that is to be found out! What IS that strange glow? What would happen if she were carrying his child? Would he stay and go mad? Would she leave with him? How would Legolas handle the news? Does Tom know how Haldir can resist the call and retain his sanity?

So many questions! Can't wait for the answers!
person Phairesse
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is a twist...He is doing what he must...and what I hoped he would do...but will he be able to keep the madness at bay?
I know, I ask questions all the time...:) :) :)
person Naira
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*ponders* Well...Then I do not want him *lifts chin in the air* No he is not desireable at all

Lovely update, give us so more

(Glad to see you got him to tell you more ;) )
person Michelle
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, Haldir, noooooooo!! What is he thinking?! Well, I know what he's thinking, but why is he thinking this way? So, he'll go insane if he doesn't answer the call? Ohhhhh, that's a good twist. I, of course, had mapped out all of his options (in my head, of course) and thought that he could stay in ME if he wanted to. Hmph. I guess that's not an option though, heh? Oh, well....I guess I'll just have to wait *sighhhh* to find out how they resolve this issue.

Hey, if all else fails, he can always take *ME* with him. *grins*

Great chapter, can't wait to read more. :D

Michelle...