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by Nephthys

person Sandra V
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK. You did it. I am slowly running out of new and even nicer things to say. :D All I could think of after reading this chapter is:

*SIGH*.... and *SIGH AGAIN*..... and *SCREW UPS...*..... *WHERE IS THE KING OF QUEENS WHEN YOU NEED HIM?*

You know, an awful lot of people wan to see this story end so they KNOW how it ends. Yet, at the same time, we all dread the day when it finally DOES end. You know what I mean?

*yet another sigh followed by a small sob*

I think I will probably bawl my eyes out once this story is over but I will also be glad you have shared it with us. Ah, what the heck, it is not finished yet, I may just as well enjoy it while you are at it. :D

OK, I an OFF to see if good ol' Vi has finally finished HER shower and gotten out of the bloody bathroom at last. I need to COOL OFF! Vi, dear, keep the shower running, I am right behind you! :D

Take care, my lady, have a great weekend!

person Sandra V
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S.:

Nearly forgot... HAVE A GREAT VACATION! :) :) :) Don't bother writing postcards or bringing back souvenirs for the hormonally challenged gang around her. Just bring back a truckload of handsome elves. Yessss, we wantsssssss the preciousssssssssss.... :D
person Rose Atlee
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hey! I made it back finally! So many chapters I had to catch up on! Very well done! I loved the way you handled both of their confessions to each other! Sweet, sexy, frustrating, exciting - you had it all! Great job! Have fun on vacation - I'm on mine this coming week.
person Michelle
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely intense! Whew...*wipes away sweat*

You know, I don’t know whether I should jump for joy, or bite my nails with worry. LOL!!! I’m *EXTREMELY* excited that Haldir and Annowe have revealed their feeling to one another, but I can’t help but to worry about what will happen next.

Is she still going to find Legolas to see if he can break their bond? Grrrrrrrrr!!!!! Tell me that she’s not *drops to knees and begs* PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me that she’s going to stay with Haldir, now. If she goes in search of Legolas, please insert a character into the story and have them slap some sense into her! LOL!!!

This was yet another wonderful chapter, Nephthys! I was completely teary while reading these two outstanding chapters. The part where Haldir reveals what’s in his heart to Annowe was so romantic *sigh* - her hesitance to find out what was in his heart, and his insistence that she knew, brought tears to my eyes...it really did. So romantic...romantic AND hot...and angsty, all at the same time!!! I loved it!

Very beautifully written! I can’t wait to find out what will happen next.

Michelle...
person Naira
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-claps hands madly- Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy such a lovely update
person Vi Janaway
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! They are finally at peace with each other. You do storms very well. :) :) :) I think I need a cold shower.
person Paige
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM

YEEESSSSSSSS!!!! *big, stupid grin on my face* Excellent job.
person Sandra V
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hon, I don't care how you do it, you can send him via UPS for all I care, but... I WANT THAT ELF!!! No, let me specify that: I want that elf, I want him now and I want him to teach me the same bloody thing he told *glares enviously at female protagonist* HER! Seriously, can you even return to an ordinary sex life with an equally ordinary male member of the human species after you have written yourself into such a wonderful frenzy over this ever so perfect elf love? Honestly I am tempted to tell my husband next time we do it to "fully unleash his desire" so we can bond, but I have a nagging feeling that won't get me very far other than earning me a few confused looks. *g*

OK, I'll keep this short and sweet since today is Harry Potter day! Yes I love that little wizard and I don't care for people who say that LOTR and HP cannot survive in the same universe. *g* Live with it, people.

Have a wonderful weekend, dear! :)

Sandra
person Michelle
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighhhhhhhh* Well, apparently, my last 2 reviews didn't go through. :\ Hopefully, this one will. *crosses fingers*

These last few chapters have really been emotionally draining. The tension between these two wonderful characters has been so thick, you could cut it with a knife! I love it! LOL!!

The reason I love this story so much is because it is an unconventional love story. This is a fantastically, wonderful story of finding and accepting love wherever it may be found. On top of that, you've managed to create characters that we all route for, and actually care about. Heck, I love Annowe and Haldir. I love Legolas, too...well, I don't love him in THIS story, but under normal circumstances I would. LOL!! In this story, I just want him longggggg gone! LOL!!!

I was in tears when Haldir finally told Annowe how he felt about her. I'm very anxious to find out what will happen to them now that Haldir may have to leave. I, myself, am hoping for a non-angsty ending. (hint, hint) *grins*

Great job!

Michelle...


person Naira
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-giggles- He's so adorable when he's desperate.