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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Legolas actually let Haldir join in the fun. I didn't think that he would, at first, but once Haldir explained himself, and his motives, I just knew Legolas was going to let him do it. I just knew it! That Haldir is a sly one, isn't he. LOL!!
Let's not forget the lucky one in all of this, Annowe. Geez, she gets to 'have her cake and eat it too.' I'm jealous. LOL!!
I can't think of many scenarios that are better than sandwiched between Legolas and Haldir, while having "hawt sex!":D That scene was so hot, and definitely worth the wait! *fans self off*
Loved the update! You're doing a fantastic job with this story...keep up the good work! :D
Michelle...
Let's not forget the lucky one in all of this, Annowe. Geez, she gets to 'have her cake and eat it too.' I'm jealous. LOL!!
I can't think of many scenarios that are better than sandwiched between Legolas and Haldir, while having "hawt sex!":D That scene was so hot, and definitely worth the wait! *fans self off*
Loved the update! You're doing a fantastic job with this story...keep up the good work! :D
Michelle...
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...
Can I swap places with her can i? Pleaaaaaaase? :p
Lovely very lovely update
Can I swap places with her can i? Pleaaaaaaase? :p
Lovely very lovely update
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee...interesting postion they're in })
Haldir is playing it cool, as usual; but Legolas is totally losing it! ROFL!! I love the way that Annowe is just kind of letting things play out. These chapters were wonderful! I was wondering how Legolas would find out about Haldir and Annowe's time together...I love the way you made it happen!
Great job! I can't believe you left the chapter where you did. Grrrrrrrr...update soon. :D
Michelle...
Haldir is playing it cool, as usual; but Legolas is totally losing it! ROFL!! I love the way that Annowe is just kind of letting things play out. These chapters were wonderful! I was wondering how Legolas would find out about Haldir and Annowe's time together...I love the way you made it happen!
Great job! I can't believe you left the chapter where you did. Grrrrrrrr...update soon. :D
Michelle...
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And there I was counting on some nice smut between the three of them :P
you can't leave us hanging here, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update again soon *bounces*
you can't leave us hanging here, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update again soon *bounces*
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That darn Annowe and her sense of loyalty! I just *KNEW* that she and Haldir would be 'gettin' it on' right now! LOL!!! So, the sexual frustration continues...grrrrrrrr!!!!!! ROFL!!
I love it! Fantastic chapters...can't wait for your next update!
Michelle...
I love it! Fantastic chapters...can't wait for your next update!
Michelle...
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pout* Meany, give us some fun! :p
I think Haldir deserves it, he's so very...no not sweet...hahaha...Well ehm..
You've seen him he's hot! :p
Alright, i'll keep quiet and waiting for another update
I think Haldir deserves it, he's so very...no not sweet...hahaha...Well ehm..
You've seen him he's hot! :p
Alright, i'll keep quiet and waiting for another update
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, A/N response first...
"Sandra – Well, I sort of feel like I must not have done my job well enough or I shouldn’t have to explain his motives. If I let him speak then his motives should be clear, yes?"
Oh dear, I really hope this isn't how you feel, lol! In fact, it is my fault, because I didn't make myself clearer in my review for chapter 11 and 12. What I meant was that I was at a bit of a loss first, when I noticed his delight in chapter 11 regarding her wish to teach his powers to Legolas. However, as I said, his motives became perfectly clear to me in chapter 12 when he pleasured himself and integrated Legolas in his fantasy. So you see, you did your homework after all. :) What I meant about your comments being enlightening is the fact it is always fun to have an author talk about his assessment of his own story, how he thinks his characters work and what makes them tick. There is ALWAYS a difference in the perception of the author and the reader which is the interesting bit about writing. IMO as an author you can never and should never aim for the reader to have the 100 % identical perception of the story that you have as an author. Because when your readers start to see something new, something that you perhaps have failed to notice yourself as an author... that is when it is really getting interesting. :)
Oh, well, don't listen to my babbling... I am off to read the two new chapters now. *grins in delight*
P.S.: I am delighted that so many people share my opinion of your latest story, btw. I hade a look again at your earlier work and while I like all of it it is amazing how far you have come ever since you started. Right now you have accomplished the perfect balance of character study and sensuality and I assume it is that which people find appealing as they step into the characters' minds. :)
"Sandra – Well, I sort of feel like I must not have done my job well enough or I shouldn’t have to explain his motives. If I let him speak then his motives should be clear, yes?"
Oh dear, I really hope this isn't how you feel, lol! In fact, it is my fault, because I didn't make myself clearer in my review for chapter 11 and 12. What I meant was that I was at a bit of a loss first, when I noticed his delight in chapter 11 regarding her wish to teach his powers to Legolas. However, as I said, his motives became perfectly clear to me in chapter 12 when he pleasured himself and integrated Legolas in his fantasy. So you see, you did your homework after all. :) What I meant about your comments being enlightening is the fact it is always fun to have an author talk about his assessment of his own story, how he thinks his characters work and what makes them tick. There is ALWAYS a difference in the perception of the author and the reader which is the interesting bit about writing. IMO as an author you can never and should never aim for the reader to have the 100 % identical perception of the story that you have as an author. Because when your readers start to see something new, something that you perhaps have failed to notice yourself as an author... that is when it is really getting interesting. :)
Oh, well, don't listen to my babbling... I am off to read the two new chapters now. *grins in delight*
P.S.: I am delighted that so many people share my opinion of your latest story, btw. I hade a look again at your earlier work and while I like all of it it is amazing how far you have come ever since you started. Right now you have accomplished the perfect balance of character study and sensuality and I assume it is that which people find appealing as they step into the characters' minds. :)
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chaper 15:
"She quickly realized that whenever he thought of it, he would swell up like a toad."
This was too funny and such a perfect picture of Haldir!!! :D
The kiss and HER little game was, of course, priceless. Two can play the game, Haldir, two can play the game...
*off to chapter 16*
"She quickly realized that whenever he thought of it, he would swell up like a toad."
This was too funny and such a perfect picture of Haldir!!! :D
The kiss and HER little game was, of course, priceless. Two can play the game, Haldir, two can play the game...
*off to chapter 16*
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16:
Oh.my.god. That chapter totally took my breath away just now and they only KISSED, lol! Seriously, what a chapter, what a scene. It was so well written I could picture it right before my eyes, just like a film. The way the dialogue went as she returned everyone of his lines and gave it right back, so perfect, it was almost like two people looking into a mirror, but it also had a completely hypnotic touch to it (which of course, was the idea!). And the way he brushed his lips against hers without actually kissing her... *faints*
OK, dear, I need to take my medication now (just KIDDING, lol!), I think my heart rate has reached alarming heights just now and my cheeks are a little flushed. :D Thank you for a great start into the new week!
Oh.my.god. That chapter totally took my breath away just now and they only KISSED, lol! Seriously, what a chapter, what a scene. It was so well written I could picture it right before my eyes, just like a film. The way the dialogue went as she returned everyone of his lines and gave it right back, so perfect, it was almost like two people looking into a mirror, but it also had a completely hypnotic touch to it (which of course, was the idea!). And the way he brushed his lips against hers without actually kissing her... *faints*
OK, dear, I need to take my medication now (just KIDDING, lol!), I think my heart rate has reached alarming heights just now and my cheeks are a little flushed. :D Thank you for a great start into the new week!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*takes a few breaths to calm the rapid beating of her heart*
That was an excellent two chapters! I can't wait for more!!! Keep up the good work!!
That was an excellent two chapters! I can't wait for more!!! Keep up the good work!!