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by Nephthys

person Michelle
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters, Nephthys!

I love the fact that Haldir is still trying to finding a way to hold onto Annowe. Yes, I know I've said it before, but his determination is very admirable. :D And Annowe certainly seems to be having a difficult time with her feelings, doesn't she? Hmm, could it be that her father, is correct? *big grin*

While Legolas is okay and all, I can't help but to cheer for Haldir in this matter. He's put in so much effort and time and planning into his relationship with Annowe - I can't help but feel like he deserves her, in the end.

But I'll anxiously wait to find out how it will all turn out...I'm in NO HURRY though...so feel free to write more, and more, and more...as many chapters as you like. *HUGE GRIN*

Great job! I'll be on the look-out for your next update. :D

Michelle...
person Michelle
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Haldir, trying to stir-up trouble between Annowe and Legolas - only to have his plan backfire on himself. Shame, shame. It seems that Annowe has a greater hold on Haldir than even he himself realizes. Ha ha! I love it. The fact that he tried to make Annowe doubt Legolas's love for her, leads me to believe that he may have even more schemes in the works in order to keep Annowe for himself? I love Haldir...he's so determined and he never gives-up! I can't wait to see what will happen on their way to the Grey Havens.

Great update! I can't wait to read more. :D

Michelle...

person Naira
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I saw the name of the chapter and laughed, I just kept picturing Haldir with a huge pout, complaining about Legolas.

The chapter itself was wonderful :) I really really liked it, I hope you update again soon.
person Michelle
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I had several things in mind that could make him feel better. *evil grin* lol.

Great update! They seemed so cozy and comfortable with each other. Their care for one another was very evident. That's so sweet. :D

But what do you mean Haldir's time in Middle Earth is done?
No, no, no, no...not when things are just coming together for himself, Annowe, and Legolas.

*sigh*

I guess I'm going to just have to wait to see how this play out. Haldir, hopefully, will end up with Annowe...:D

A girl can hope, can't she! :D

Michelle...
person Naira
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no no! I'll tie him to a chair if I must but he's not going anywhere lol

It's true you are indeed an unlucky lady hahaha, though his posessiveness seems more childlike most times *grins*
person Elena Terry
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job with the "hawt" Elf sex, it was really arousing!!
person Michelle
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww...what a great update!

Legolas worrying over Haldir was so sweet. And the fact that he was able to put aside his jealousy in order to keep Haldir content was very kind of him.

Annowe's determination was so great! She really meant to get to them, didn't she? And her reaction to finding Haldir alive, was so touching, that I actually did tear up a bit.

Poor Haldir - the thought of him suffering in bed just seems wrong. *evil grin* I'm so happy that Annowe is there to take care of him.

Great update! Can't wait to read more.

Michelle...
person Naira
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are right, the choice to come is theirs, but...I know if I'd ask of Rumil to go he would. *smirks* It must be horrible to be stuck with Haldir like that haha, although he does provide good stories.

Lovely update, Legolas was very sweet in there haha
person Naira
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tihi you picked the wrwong brother to be your muse, Rumil is much better in control, very sweet ;)

anyhow, i liked the update a lot, cant wait for more
person Michelle
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haldir's parting with Annowe was really touching. I felt kind of sorry for the both of them. I felt sorry for Annowe because she fears that something will happen to Legolas and Haldir - actually having a premonition about something bad happening to Haldir. I felt sorry for Haldir because he actully knows that something bad is going to happen to him, but can do nothing but meet his fate. He's so brave...*sigh*

I can't believe you left a cliffhanger like that! Grrrrrr. LOL!!
Why, oh why, didn't Haldir understand that he needed the "Dwarf" sooner?!

Great update! I hope Haldir will be okay. *bites nails nervously*

Michelle...