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by Nephthys

person Michelle
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, Haldir doesn't like the thought of Legolas making a sudden, unexpected, appearance? Aww, does someone feel slightly threatened by the thought? Aww...I don't think dear Haldir has anything to worry about anyway...I don't think so, not after reading all that happened in the last chapter, anyway. :D

Great chapter, Nephthys! These two can't get enough of each other, and I can't get enough of them! lol. They have truly surrendered themselves to one another. I wonder what Annowe was about to say while they were being intimate? Something like, "I love you, Haldir!?"...maybe? *grins*

The pace and flow and mood of this story is perfect. I can't wait for the next update. Great work!

Michelle...
person Vi Janaway
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Making up for lost time, they are...:) :) :)
How are they going to let each other go?
person Naira
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story always throws me into a heap of confusement :p I always think im in another section...As again I made the review in the book section of lotr, instead of here and I dont like repeating myself :p

I loved the update, give us some more
person Michelle
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just me? *wipes sweat away*

These last few chapters have been extremely HOT! Their acceptance of their "situation" seems to have released them from all of their inhibitions. I love it })

That scene of them on horseback had me swooning and thudding, double time! LOL.
I'm looking forward to reading more about their journey to the Havens...I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Legolas doesn't unexpectantly show up. :/ That would be SUCH a BUMMER! LOL!!!

Great chapters! Can't wait to read more. :D

Michelle...
person Phairesse
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been such an intriguing story...sigh...One can only wish...
person Naira
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*purrs* This is much better..Good Haldir *pets his hair*

Update again soon pretty pretty pretty pleeeeeeeeease :)
person Michelle
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy with the way things have turned out for these two. They seem to have come to an understanding, of sorts...I guess? lol :D

What could it hurt for her to give herself to him for this short while? Nothing. I don't blame him for being so relentless...he seems to understand her more than she understands herself at times - he seems to be able to please her in a way no one else *coughLegolascough* has been able to. That love scene was deliciously HOOTTTTTTTT!!! Very nice!

I love the flow of this story, it's absolutely perfect :D

Can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Michelle...
person Naira
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pets haldir's hair* That's a good boy

Lovely update huns, very nice, can't wait for more
person Michelle
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is Haldir doing to poor, poor Annowe? Is this still a part of his game? Or does he truly have feelings for Annowe? Like she said, he already got what he wanted, so what is he trying to do? Or does he want more, and not realize it? *SIGGGGH*

Although I do LOVE the persistance of Haldir, I'm beginning to feel a little sorry for Annowe. It seems like he wants her to love him, even though he knows that he's leaving. What kind of game is he playing? Grrrrr...Haldir, Haldir! What are you up to?

I can't wait to find out! :D Great update!

Michelle...
person Naira
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Annowe, he's being a bitch :p