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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgot...
"Quickly, she pressed her face into his shoulder so she did not have to see him like that – his body merged with hers and his eyes, soft as a gray dove, gazing down on her tenderly."
And you expect me not to faint when you talk about his eyes like that? *sighs* Hot, sexy and incredibly romantic all in one sentence. Brilliant! *glares at Haldir* Wipe that smug grin of your face, Mister!
"Quickly, she pressed her face into his shoulder so she did not have to see him like that – his body merged with hers and his eyes, soft as a gray dove, gazing down on her tenderly."
And you expect me not to faint when you talk about his eyes like that? *sighs* Hot, sexy and incredibly romantic all in one sentence. Brilliant! *glares at Haldir* Wipe that smug grin of your face, Mister!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waves back at Michelle*
Hi, gal! :) No problem, dear, any friend of his majesty the Horny Bastard and any fan of our wonderful story author is a friend of mine. :D
*Looks at author" You ARE in the middle of writing the next chapter are you?
"Looks at horny bastard* Give her some... *coughs*... inspiration, elf!
Hi, gal! :) No problem, dear, any friend of his majesty the Horny Bastard and any fan of our wonderful story author is a friend of mine. :D
*Looks at author" You ARE in the middle of writing the next chapter are you?
"Looks at horny bastard* Give her some... *coughs*... inspiration, elf!
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeek! I can't believe she said, what she said! Well...actually, I can believe it, but I can't believe it *grins*
Loved these chapters. They've really showed us the how close these two have become, and how hard it will be for them if/when they are seperated. *sigh*
These chapters are so romantic; two lovers, alone in the woods, making love every chance they get....it just doesn't get any better than that. *sigh*
Marvelous job! I'm loving every word of this story, so please keep up the great work! And please keep "Mr. Wicked" inspired! More, more, more...*evil laughter*
Michelle...:D
PS. Hi Sanda V. Nope, I'm not the Michelle from your MC list. But hello to you, anyway. *waves*
Loved these chapters. They've really showed us the how close these two have become, and how hard it will be for them if/when they are seperated. *sigh*
These chapters are so romantic; two lovers, alone in the woods, making love every chance they get....it just doesn't get any better than that. *sigh*
Marvelous job! I'm loving every word of this story, so please keep up the great work! And please keep "Mr. Wicked" inspired! More, more, more...*evil laughter*
Michelle...:D
PS. Hi Sanda V. Nope, I'm not the Michelle from your MC list. But hello to you, anyway. *waves*
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I wonder if his Royal Majesty the Horny Bastard realizes he is no langer having sex but making love! :D
I guess you know me by know, there isn't a thing I have probably not said about this story by now and I am only repeating myself. But you know I am at awe with it and in love with your characters, so consider me another one sighing happily while she read this. I am just not always sure you realize youself just how good this is. I have to say, that I am normally incredibly picky, I am never 100 % satisfied, I don't flame, but usually give constructive criticism. But with this story all I do is relax, lean back and enjoy every word of it. There is just so much more behind this story then the sex which is what makes it so beautiful. And I tell you something else: When you are through with this story (a day I hope will still be a long time away!) I will print the entire thing and put it on a shelf to have a look at it again every now and then. :)
I also realized that one of the genius strokes of this story is the way you use the "desire", that is so unique! It ads a whole new layer among all those others to the story and the way you describe its effets I swear I feel myself swept away while reading the story. It is almost like a another character. Just beautiful, girl!
I guess you know me by know, there isn't a thing I have probably not said about this story by now and I am only repeating myself. But you know I am at awe with it and in love with your characters, so consider me another one sighing happily while she read this. I am just not always sure you realize youself just how good this is. I have to say, that I am normally incredibly picky, I am never 100 % satisfied, I don't flame, but usually give constructive criticism. But with this story all I do is relax, lean back and enjoy every word of it. There is just so much more behind this story then the sex which is what makes it so beautiful. And I tell you something else: When you are through with this story (a day I hope will still be a long time away!) I will print the entire thing and put it on a shelf to have a look at it again every now and then. :)
I also realized that one of the genius strokes of this story is the way you use the "desire", that is so unique! It ads a whole new layer among all those others to the story and the way you describe its effets I swear I feel myself swept away while reading the story. It is almost like a another character. Just beautiful, girl!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs contentedly while her heart beats out of her chest* You have way outdone yourself this time! I had three chapters to read to catch up, and that last one completely took my breath away! Excellent job! I think my heart stopped for a second when she told him not to leave! I can't wait to read more! *is a bit reluctant for this to end* Hopefully there will be plenty more chapters before the final decisions are made! :)
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK... first of all, can I just say that I absolutely HATE Fujitsu Siemens and its repair center? My laptop broke down and I send it in. It took them two months (!!!) instead of one week as promised to repair it and when I got it back they had completely formated the entire harddrive without prior notice! Everything, and I mean everything was gone and I didn't have a chance beforehand to make a propper update.
So I spent the past few weeks recreating my files from memory, reinstalling programms, looking for bookmarks I had... I did everything from scratch. And now that I am almost through I finally have the time to enjoy the finer things in live - like that thing which is perhaps my favourite fan fiction story.
To put this plain and simple:
This was and still is the BEST adult LOTR fan fiction story I have EVER read and I have read a lot of fan fiction of all categories. It has a wonderful storyline that builds up towards a climax, the language is beautiful, the characters three dimensional and fully fleshed out and while a lot of writers deal with the beauty of the elves, you captures their beauty as well as their sensuality just perfectly in the form of Haldir and Legolas. The sensuality, too, is breathtaking. And I am not necessarily talking about the sex scenes but the little moments like Annowe combing Haldir's hair. Beautiful, yet very sensual and intimate.
The other thing is that one feels incredibly sympathetic towards these three characters, I have grown incredibly fond of them, Haldir in particular. He may be a horny bastard after all, but there is SO much more to him it is almost hartbreaking and Annowe is one of the very few OTs I actually like and adore simply because you made her such a strong, sympathetic and sensual women. I never thought I would say this, but I have a littly crush on HH (horny Haldir) now, I fear. ;)
I simply cannot praise your story highly enough and I don't often do that. In fact I have never done it to the degree I am doing it at the moment. I just hope I can get across what a delight it was and still is to be reading it. And I cannot thank you enough for sharing it with all of us. You show people what is beautiful about this kind of literature and I hope that all newbies coming here have the good fortune to run into your story first.
I hope I could bring across what a delight it has been for me and how much I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story (as well as the others but this one surpases them by a long shot!) and again, I cannot thank you enough for it. :)
That being said... I am not sure she is reading in this section or the other one, but if she does:
Hi, VI JANAWAY!!! *waves* It is great to see you around here as well, we are both members on the MC lst! :) I am not sure whether the MICHELLE reviewing here is the one from the MC list as well, but just in case: Hi, Michelle! :)
So I spent the past few weeks recreating my files from memory, reinstalling programms, looking for bookmarks I had... I did everything from scratch. And now that I am almost through I finally have the time to enjoy the finer things in live - like that thing which is perhaps my favourite fan fiction story.
To put this plain and simple:
This was and still is the BEST adult LOTR fan fiction story I have EVER read and I have read a lot of fan fiction of all categories. It has a wonderful storyline that builds up towards a climax, the language is beautiful, the characters three dimensional and fully fleshed out and while a lot of writers deal with the beauty of the elves, you captures their beauty as well as their sensuality just perfectly in the form of Haldir and Legolas. The sensuality, too, is breathtaking. And I am not necessarily talking about the sex scenes but the little moments like Annowe combing Haldir's hair. Beautiful, yet very sensual and intimate.
The other thing is that one feels incredibly sympathetic towards these three characters, I have grown incredibly fond of them, Haldir in particular. He may be a horny bastard after all, but there is SO much more to him it is almost hartbreaking and Annowe is one of the very few OTs I actually like and adore simply because you made her such a strong, sympathetic and sensual women. I never thought I would say this, but I have a littly crush on HH (horny Haldir) now, I fear. ;)
I simply cannot praise your story highly enough and I don't often do that. In fact I have never done it to the degree I am doing it at the moment. I just hope I can get across what a delight it was and still is to be reading it. And I cannot thank you enough for sharing it with all of us. You show people what is beautiful about this kind of literature and I hope that all newbies coming here have the good fortune to run into your story first.
I hope I could bring across what a delight it has been for me and how much I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story (as well as the others but this one surpases them by a long shot!) and again, I cannot thank you enough for it. :)
That being said... I am not sure she is reading in this section or the other one, but if she does:
Hi, VI JANAWAY!!! *waves* It is great to see you around here as well, we are both members on the MC lst! :) I am not sure whether the MICHELLE reviewing here is the one from the MC list as well, but just in case: Hi, Michelle! :)
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters!
What is Galadriel up to? She's a wise one, so I know that there's more to her ordering Annowe to escort Haldir to the Havens than just wanting him to arrive there safely. Oohhhhh, I wonder what she knows!?
And what is going on with Haldir? His loss of control was very uncharacteristic of him. Oohhhhh, it has something to do with whatever Galadriel knows, doesn't it? Gahhhhh...so many questions, so many questions! lol.
Well, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update to find out if any of my questions will be answered. I'm looking forward to that update. Super hot chapters, girlie! Keep up the good work! :D
Michelle...
What is Galadriel up to? She's a wise one, so I know that there's more to her ordering Annowe to escort Haldir to the Havens than just wanting him to arrive there safely. Oohhhhh, I wonder what she knows!?
And what is going on with Haldir? His loss of control was very uncharacteristic of him. Oohhhhh, it has something to do with whatever Galadriel knows, doesn't it? Gahhhhh...so many questions, so many questions! lol.
Well, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update to find out if any of my questions will be answered. I'm looking forward to that update. Super hot chapters, girlie! Keep up the good work! :D
Michelle...
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glowing? Haldir ourt of control? HOLY CRAP!!!!! *laughs* Ah, but these were a nice two chapters, even though the March Warden was very nearly - dare I say it - human in his taking of her that time. *gasp* What a horrid thought! ...or is it?... Keep up the great work, and I look forward to the next chapters!
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But she HAS to tell him....You handle emotions so very well.
Honestly...I hope he doesn't leave Arda yet. He still has much to do.
You took an unusual idea and made it work
Honestly...I hope he doesn't leave Arda yet. He still has much to do.
You took an unusual idea and made it work
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AUUUGGGHHH!! Please tell me there is going to be another chapter after 42. I need to drink a big glass of ice water after that. Scratch that, I'll just dump the ice water over my head. All I can say is WOW! Now where is that pesky elf, I have a few ideas to try out on him. :-)