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by DurOltha

person angelsfyre1
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous story!!! Your characters are always well thought out and realistic. The writing style brings out the emotions of the characters and the stories are fun and well done. I look forward to updates on your aother stories and now need to see if there are any left I have NOT YET read!!! LOL Keep up the great work!!
person Nightcloud
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one Dark! I started reading your stories with Forbidden Falls and I am of course enjoying the madness of Fire Dance. But I'm also enjoying reading these that I've never seen before. Your stories have a poigancy that touches the spirit, a wittiness that makes them fun and you also add that realism that makes a reader think. I hope you continue to write for a very long time.
person animebishieluver
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whee! another story! fun fun fun, lovin' every second! keep writing, you're amazing, but once again, I think this would've been netter if it was longer. oh well, onto the next story! ^_^
person Jen
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thranduil's gonna get some... maybe. Cool. I like the story. I wonder how Legolas is going to feel about his father wanting his best friend.
person HHS
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well at least it seems that Thranduil found a distraction which I hope is mutual.
person HHS
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One thing,do you have a beta?I'm just getting used to it but the dialogues for each character are bunched up.I sometimes can't tell where the dialogue for each character ends.Anyway,it is good for a first.I hope that you'll continue.
person HHS
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know,this story is going too fast.
person Haldir\'s Heart & Soul
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping that it was Legolas.WOOHOO!!!
person Syndrooma
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, but it's all happening very fast. Maybe just a bit too fast... Anyways, I strongly suggest you get a beta. The grammar mistakes were irritating... The pairings are good, though. Write more.
person bettina
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love that story. Please finish it. Good story line.