rate_review Reviews

brilliant :) i keep coming back to this story time and time again :) thankyou

oh, they are perfect couple ^__^ and fanfic is simply awersome!

OK, ready for some constuctive critism? Here it comes: You seem to have a small problem with sign language (it could also be that something has been changed, in some way. It might just be the computer that screwed it up). As an example: Through the story there is a lot of commas beside each other (,,,). Also, sometimes it seems that someting has been deleted from the text, so it doesn't fit together, (you, you,) (was, was) and some sentences doesn't have endings. And you have a tendence to write 'to' instead of 'too' (take it easy, lots of writers do that).
On the contrary, I really liked your story and the plot. Except for the small 'to'/'too' problem, I didn't encounter spelling errors. I do want to compliment you, because you are a good writer. Keep on writing.
MiniMew

I liked this story it was very sweet. The writing is good and it was very easy to read. Please update soon!

OMG! I loved this story. I especially loved how sweet and caring Glorfindel was. Great job showing Erestor's fragile side. I am glad that the two 'house elves' got their comeupance. Way to go!

I luv it!! Heh heh. Gotta luv Glory. Very interesting way of proving them wrong. GREAT story!! ^_^

Perfect!!!! I need a cold shower!!!!! ICE ICE ICE ICEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

It SYA "TBC," so we're all waiting out here!

I meant to say, "It SAYs " you continue. I know you love those seduction scenes (so do we), but I love it when you move on with a story too, and develop more.

My second favorite of your stories Fishy! Love your sweet, protective, caring Glorfy! The whole thing is just sooooo sweet. And Oh My what a beautiful love scene!!!