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for Ravished

by LilSlasher

person attirb
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
revenge can be so sweet!
let's see what the boys come up with.
:-)

bye
attirb
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good, so cute. makes me wanna pinch Orli's cheeks. I bet he's so red by the hobbits catching them!! Well, at lest it wasn't Peter. lol.
~*Amoureux*~
*skips off mouthing 'twisted'*
person Orlando\'s Sex Slave
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fuckin' hot....I mean....wow. You need to continue this ASAP!
person Shui
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* That was soooo great! I mean, permanent grin on my face. Not only was there slashy goodness, but it was soo funny! Beanie is such an ass I love it! And the hobbits applause, that was great. *bows* Great great story. If you have other stories, I shall read and become a devoted fan. If you dont...write more stories!!

~Shui
person Juliette
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I really can't see Legolas saying that" ROFLMAO! That Viggo, always so concerned about staying in character. They are totally busted--how embarrassing, at least for Orli. I don't think Viggo cares. Please update soon!
person Laney
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this story is so hot! OMG! I read it last night before going to bed...bad idea, but anyway, lol...umm...yeah, so I went through all my classes today not being able to get the picture of Orli on Viggo's lap at the table...so good! Great job, very hot!
person Amoureux de Sang
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
twisted. The word of the day is "Twisted" and I shall mouth that at you everytime I see you today..er... tomorrow. or is tomorrow today? it is one twenty six am....


*sits still, blinks. blinks again. turns and mouths "twisted" at you and then skips off to bed.*
person Juliette
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beanie is a bad boy, but so are Viggo and Orli! And little 'Lijah, sounds like he's getting quite the education there. Please write more and soon!
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.. i love the way you write. Keep it up! it's great to see new writers out there with such great potential!

ooohhh.. write something with sean in it. mmmmm Bean....
~*Amoureux*~
person Naira
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, update soon please :p