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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was extremely hot! Viggo was so sweet with Orli, it's nice to see another side of him besides the manipulative bastard who is holding those photos over the other guys' heads. More soon please!
"Viggo owned his soul." Kinda scary, because what's Viggo going to do with it?
"Viggo owned his soul." Kinda scary, because what's Viggo going to do with it?
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord. That..wow. I really would like to read more, it's just so interesting! I want to see what happenes at the Halloween gathering, and I despretely want more Orlando :D
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! That tree at the end reminds me of the tree from "The Ring" and that can't be good. Maybe Viggo doesn't believe in ghosts, but that doesn't matter if the ghosts believe in him! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens when the others show up for the "gathering" on All Hallows Eve.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! It's great! I can't wait to see where you're going with it, and how everything will turn out! Keep up the good work!
And Viggo isn't mean.. he's just kinky with a camara
=D
~Amoureux~
And Viggo isn't mean.. he's just kinky with a camara
=D
~Amoureux~
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm lovely update, I cant wait to read more...pleaaaase hurrrrry :p
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, but it seems like Viggo needs the tables to be turned. *wicked grin*
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wicked, wicked, Viggo. Poor naive Orli. This is fun so far, but you might want to change organism to orgasm at the beginning of the story.
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I can feel the tension being drawn bow-string tight! Someone or something is going to snap and soon. I think Viggo deserves whatever comes his way. Keep up the good work.
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story! Mean old Viggo and his dirty pics.
Would only change the "organism" in chapter two. ;)
Would only change the "organism" in chapter two. ;)
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU HAD ME CRACKING UP AT THE "“You could be a porn star.” “Bite me, Viggo.” “I have, Orlando.”" PART! I LOVED THAT! THIS IS AWESOME! I WAS LAUGHING AT A LOT OF PARTS! CONTINUE SOON! PLEASE!