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for Photograghic Memory

by LilSlasher

person Juliette
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The gang's all here! Oh my poor Eric, I feel for him, being stuck with that bunch in a den o' ghosts. That was not *quite* a catfight he was having with Viggo over Orli (when two guys fight over another guy, is it still a catfight? Or maybe a dogfight instead?) Looking forward to more!
person Juliette
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Whole lot happening this chapter! Where to begin...Viggo just keeps getting nastier the more we find out. So he drugged those drinks at the infamous Halloween Party. Lots of good Dom angst. He reminds me of his "Lost" character, Charlie, a bit. Karl and David *were* involved after all. I take it Viggo doesn't care for Mr Depp? Can we please find out why, I would really like to know. And that bit with ghostly little Victoria was nice and creepy.

Are you really thinking of bringing Eric Bana into the story? I wouldn't object, he's the main reason I saw Troy twice in the theater and bought the DVD.

Looking forward to Saturday and finding out who the mysterious others are!
person Megs
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter! It was interesting, hearing Dom's backstory with Viggo. You felt sad for him being 'no longer the wanted one", even though you know he's better with Elijah. Are we getting any yummy Dom-angst/ h/c in the next chapter? *begs prettily*
person Juliette
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. Liked at the beginning where Sean had to be the "dad" to the fractious hobbits. The backstory for the house was creepy. I found the story of the doctor who used his own kids to practice his surgery to be the scariest part. Now who the hell are these other guests and what part are they to play? Please update soon!
person Meggie
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How I love angsty-Dom! Please let us see more of him?!
person Juliette
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! The boys think they're being clever, but Viggo is already two steps ahead of them! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens and how the ghosts factor in.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, evil cliffie! Get back here and tell us who else Viggo has pictures of, and how they are going to help the lads! And how do the ghosts fit into this? More ASAP, please!
person Juliette
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, evil cliffie! Get back here and tell us who else Viggo has pictures of, and how they are going to help the lads! And how do the ghosts fit into this? More ASAP, please!
person Juliette
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry about the repeat, I was so excited by the chapter I forgot to type my name in the first time!
person Juliette
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heehee, Viggo the lion! And Orli was worried that Viggo was calling him a girl, that was cute. Poor Dom, sounds like he's really haunted by what happened between him and Viggo. Can't wait for your next chapter (I think you said tomorrow, you wonderful author?)