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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!!! That was creepy. I was looking over my shoulder half the time!!! Every little noise in the house started to make me jump. Whoa... creepy...
But, hell... keep it coming!!!
Beck
But, hell... keep it coming!!!
Beck
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good update! So Victoria might be evil? She reminds me alot of Samarra from "The Ring." I'm still wondering who the hooded people headed for the cemetery are. Hopefully it's not three college film students trying to make a documentary about a scary local legend. Looking forward to your next update and Eric, um, releasing all that energy, shall we say?
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.. it's so interesting.. with naked orli.. and ghosts getting it on.
:D
:D
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you! I'm glad you like my suggestion, and look forward to seeing you working it into the story! A reviewer is always pleased that her comments are noticed.
Great update! Jonathan almost freezing Dom was terrifying--I thought Dom was going to have a heart attack or go into shock or something. And my poor Eric passed out! Well, let's face it, it might be for the best for now. But now I'm scared as to what Viggo and Orli have to do to avoid being bound to the property forever, and how it connects to all the guys being called there. It wouldn't be human sacrifice, would it? [shivers] There were so many murders on the property, it makes you wonder. Please update soon!
PS--I don't know if you deliberately had Viggo thinking that Dom sounded "Lost" or if it was just an accidental turn of phrase, but as a fan of both "Lost" and Dom, I loved it!
Great update! Jonathan almost freezing Dom was terrifying--I thought Dom was going to have a heart attack or go into shock or something. And my poor Eric passed out! Well, let's face it, it might be for the best for now. But now I'm scared as to what Viggo and Orli have to do to avoid being bound to the property forever, and how it connects to all the guys being called there. It wouldn't be human sacrifice, would it? [shivers] There were so many murders on the property, it makes you wonder. Please update soon!
PS--I don't know if you deliberately had Viggo thinking that Dom sounded "Lost" or if it was just an accidental turn of phrase, but as a fan of both "Lost" and Dom, I loved it!
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will beg, I will *plead*, I will drop myself and grovel before you for some Dom angst! (I'm loving the rest of it, too!)
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so that's where you got the names. I didn't know Viggo's or Orli's middle names, so the only Pete I associate with them is PJ. I love PJ, but it would be too weird to have him show up in this story!
Good update. Poor Eric, he's really confuzzed. Is he going to take Sean up on his offer, or does he only want Orli? IMHO, he and Sean would be hot. And Poor Dom, it was really torture for him to watch that video. I don't think Lijah will be able to offer much comfort unless Dom tells him the full story of what went on between him and Viggo. Please update soon, I am worried about the people with the hoods and what they may be planning!
Good update. Poor Eric, he's really confuzzed. Is he going to take Sean up on his offer, or does he only want Orli? IMHO, he and Sean would be hot. And Poor Dom, it was really torture for him to watch that video. I don't think Lijah will be able to offer much comfort unless Dom tells him the full story of what went on between him and Viggo. Please update soon, I am worried about the people with the hoods and what they may be planning!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa Eric! He is in for it now, but will he go along with Sean's plans or will he protest? You had me a bit concerned in the part where Viggo was talking about Peter showing up. At first I thought you meant PJ, and I'm like "Damn, PJ's in it too? Fran is going to be seriously pissed!" But then I read down a few lines and got that Peter was another one of the ghosts. Very creepy scene at the end with the puddle of blood. Please update soon!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what? YOU'RE SICK IN THE HEAD!!! Heheheh I like you. you're like me:) please let me know when you next update. I'm so addicted to your fic. VIGGO/ORLI 4 EVA!!! W00T!!!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now how can you leave it here?
Are the ghostsies going to hurt Eric? Pwetty pwease? :p
I hope you will update again soon
Are the ghostsies going to hurt Eric? Pwetty pwease? :p
I hope you will update again soon
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.. as ever, of course. Mmmm Eric. If he wasn't so straight, I'd swear he had the hots for Orli.. as it is, I think I should like him and Sean dening their gayness together. with alcohol. hmmm.. I think I shall go write about Eric and Sean now.
Oh, and great story. Got distracted by the thoughts of Eric and Sean together, pardon me for that =D
Can't wait to see Orli's reaction when he finds out they are watching a tape of him and Viggo.. Is it a tape, or is it a live action thing going on? Never know with all of Viggo's camaras around the house and the security system. Great ghostie, btw. I assume we'll be seeing more of her, maybe a few other visitor's as well from the ghost side? Look, lol, I'm the beta, so I get to see the chapters before they go up on here and already I'm wanting to know whats gonna happen next!! Well, at lest I'll know a day ahead of everyone else *points and laughs at everyone else*
*smooch to lilslasher* Great Job! But whats goingon with the tree, and the ghosts and the basement?? Anyone else gonna show up? Sean and them gonna get revenge? Or maybe just a massive orgy!! YEAH ORGY~!!!!
~*Amoureux de Sang*~
*hoping for the orgy*
Oh, and great story. Got distracted by the thoughts of Eric and Sean together, pardon me for that =D
Can't wait to see Orli's reaction when he finds out they are watching a tape of him and Viggo.. Is it a tape, or is it a live action thing going on? Never know with all of Viggo's camaras around the house and the security system. Great ghostie, btw. I assume we'll be seeing more of her, maybe a few other visitor's as well from the ghost side? Look, lol, I'm the beta, so I get to see the chapters before they go up on here and already I'm wanting to know whats gonna happen next!! Well, at lest I'll know a day ahead of everyone else *points and laughs at everyone else*
*smooch to lilslasher* Great Job! But whats goingon with the tree, and the ghosts and the basement?? Anyone else gonna show up? Sean and them gonna get revenge? Or maybe just a massive orgy!! YEAH ORGY~!!!!
~*Amoureux de Sang*~
*hoping for the orgy*