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for Photograghic Memory

by LilSlasher

person Dann
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic FF! I love it! The LotR boys are all so hot!

It's all so creepy it's cool! Is Lij possed? I hope he's ok! And Dom! :o!!! I hope he'll be ok!!! Creepy stuff!! Victoria must be something quite evil musn't she?

Dang, this should be made into a film! :P Heh Heh, Loving every min of it! Please please please please keep it up!!!!!

Hugz + Kisses - Danny XxX
person Veronica
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Jesus Flying Christ in a chicken basket!
WOW. Fucking WOW. This fic is absofrigginlutely FANTASTIC. I don't think I've ever read something so dark and twisted! Well maybe, but... LOL...
WOW. Good... fucking... job.
person Juliette
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Intense stuff there. Was Lijah possessed? If so, by what or whom? Please update again soon!
person Meggie
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squees*
My Dom-angst might be coming up! *hopes this is so*
person Juliette
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Things continue to get scarier by the minute. Rooms that smell like rotting flesh, slimy apparitions that want Orlando, wolves prowling (Eric was a riot when he was calling them kitties though!) Now where have Elijah and Dom got off too? I hope no evil ones have grabbed them. Please update again soon!

PS--I cracked up when Karl told Viggo he should try to "speak friend and enter" to get into the house! He and Dave are really wasted, aren't they? Well, so's my boy Eric for that matter--is he about to become *really* good friends with Sean?
person Naira
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't kill Dom ! :p

Update again soon, please
person Juliette
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, yeah, what about Victoria? Is she evil? And it sounds like the "incentive" is about to kick in, which should make thing veddy veddy interesting, especially for Eric. Liked the explanation about the robed ones, it was suitable creepy. Please update again soon!
person angel
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very creepy chapter! i still think viggo is an asshole! i just hope nothing bad happens to anyone. update soon! :)
person NEWENIT
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOhhhhh....you left us right at the edge on that one.....you minx!

And this part here:

Viggo? Can't.." he panted, "no more, pleeese." They were greeted with Orlando in surround sound as they entered the room. Viggo immediately stopped the tape and ejected it from the VCR.

Orli breathed a sigh of relief when he did. He remembered this one, some were foggy at best, but this one stood out. What they had heard was the beginning of an insane plea that Orli had spewed when he really just couldn't take it anymore. It had gone from what they heard, to out-right begging before Viggo had gagged him. He really didn't want them to see that.


WELLLLL....I'D LOVE TO READ IT!!! WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOUR ELABORATION ON THAT PARTICULAR PART...YOU DO BDSM JUST DIVINELY!!!! I AM HOOKED!!!

More soon, this is a great story, and to THINK you almost didn't post it.....THAT would have been a travesty indeed!!!

NEWENIT
person Rae
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an evil cliff hanger. I sat down and read this whole thing in two hours. You write very well. Please update soon!