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This story is very good... please write more soon... I like how you made the wood elves... and Legolas is so sweet.

Although I have reading everything what you have written, still surprises to me wonderfully well that you write...

This, as are all your stories, is a wonder to read. You write with such detail and flair that I just can't get enough. Can't wait for more and hopefully more Legolas

Oh, my dear, I am delighted and privileged to leave reviews for you, especially in this charming, delightful tale! You already know I love your writing, and that stories where the humour and affection are underlain with angst and dark sadness are my favourites.... :-) This fits all the bills, and this new chapter is just wonderful. I also hugely appreciate the listing of Thranduil's wives and their various children. So, first Wife is also Legolas's aunt, is she? I hope she loves him as much as Ada's younger wife loves the child....

But such a deep-spirited little toddler, so wise and wonderfully precocious--but still very much a child, with his dog-hair-covered, spit-shined fingers (poor Erestor!! *snicker*) and his many many questions.... I look forward to the next chapters of this story!

I guess it would be too much to hope that in "Feud", Thranduil will ever admit his paternity and seek the forgiveness of his own child... *sob!* But this Thranduil is wonderful and adorable, and I just love the relationship he has with his special little son. Rock on--this is a great story!!

Cheers,
Jasta

I love this story. Legalos is adorable. I love it. Your description of the march in was awesome. Plaese update soon b/c i don't know how long i can wait for the next part.

This is SUCH a good story... is it in a different timeline and milieu from Feud? It is so lovely to see Thranduil as a good (and fricking PROLIFIC!) Adar.... :-) I love his interaction with each of the children, especially little Legolas, the baby of a big bunch. (Is this kid able to even breathe without some older sibling swooping down on him to make him behave?? )

I love the way you use words, and look forward greatly to more chapters. Thanks for this neat tale!

Hello Narcolinde. Wonderful writing.Your stories are precious. I follow to you from the first chapter of Feud published in the group "Legolas in Chains". I write few revisions because I understand single a little of English. In order to read histories use a translator. You understand something of Spanish?Please continuous with the story, it is a wonder. Greetings

It is a precious story. You are one of the best writers...

No reviews? Well it isn't THAT bad!

Poor elves, stuck in the rain. Poor erestor, forced to leave his comfy rooms in Imladris. What came between the worthy re-born elda and the wood elves' king?

Maybe the second chapter will attract some attention, please don't stop just because folks don't review much here.