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for Rider of the Mark

by ZeDrippyVessel

person seansbeanie
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! You write with great empathy. Here's hoping Aefre (and we) don't have to wait too much longer for the last ride home.
person kalia
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just found this story, it is beautiful! I have loved EVERY chapter and frankly I'm just desperate for more.
Please make this story last LONGER...with MORE detail... and LENGTHIER chapters... please please please!!???
aghhh god i LOVE this story!!
person Yanic
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for them to reunite! Lovely as always
person Juliette
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Horse Lordlets and Shield Toddlers, how adorable! I hope Gamling and Aefre get at least one of each.

Poor Eomer, trying hard to adjust to the fact that he's King on top of mourning his uncle, worrying about his sister, and readying the troops to go on a seemingly hopeless mission to Mordor. He seems to be coping as best he can, I'm glad he has Gamling there to help.

Good to see Haleth, Son of Hama again. I always wondered what he did after Helm's Deep was over. I also like how you added that other Shieldmaidens disguised themselves as men and fought at Pelennor Fields. You figure if Rohan had this ancient tradition of Shieldmaidens in the first place, Eowyn couldn't have been the only one. Please update soon!
person seansbeanie
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Sweet ending to this chapter. More for Gamling to come home to. Get him home soon!
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I, like so many of your other readers, am in love with this story, because of it's originality and it's 'praise of older men'!. It is beautiful, fun, and adventuresome. You are a truly gifted writer. I especially like that you gave Theoden a 'special mention', as his character is one of my favorites, and one too seldom mentioned in fan fictions, as is Gamling's. Bravo!
person Guylaine
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good! My heart stopped when i reached the final chapter. Please! I want more! I couldn't believe how intense it was. Thank you! Can't wait for the conclusion.
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are no words. None. Truly an amazing chapter for an amazing fic. I bow to the master.
person Yanic
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was more moving than if you had posted that chapter in a different style. Amazinf stuff
person Juliette
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was intense. And good. You really captured the feeling of the battlefield.