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for Rider of the Mark

by ZeDrippyVessel

person Pandorag
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good! You are a very good story teller. I am always amazed at how i get tensed reading it. I love it. I wish for the end to not come too soon and yet i can't wait to see what will happen. Nice touch with Willan looking interested....
person Nethien
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! great work!!!!!
person seansbeanie
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The triumphant return! Very intense. Again-great word imagery. I can also really feel for Aefre. You've made your characters so real! Thanks Zee!
person Pandorag
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a rush! You are good at this! I just can't wait for the rest of it. I check on this story everyday...Wow! Thanks!
person Juliette
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update Zee! Gamling speaking fluent drunkenese was very funny despite the graveness of his injury. Eadignes and Aefre seem to have him in hand so far, and it looks like he will recover. I can't wait to see what little secrets our lady of the Blue Whale will spill about Gamling. Please update again soon!
person DJSparkles
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! Once more, I salute you. And wounding Gamling so close to home, that was just unfair! I can't wait for more!
person seansbeanie
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another moving chapter. I'm smiling through the tears. Congrats on the writing award. I agree most heartily!
person Ash D
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place. It is well-deserved in my opinion. One of the best fics I have read in a long time and believe me I've read quite a few. I will be sorry to see this one end but I am waiting for the inevitable conclusion.

Ash
person Juliette
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Looks like Gamling is headed straight for bed upon homecoming, but not in the way he'd imagined ! I have all faith in Aefre to nurse him through his injury.

Good update. At first I was a little miffed at Eomer's not wanting to go home and see to things there. Then I realized that he probably is avoiding having to go back to a place where everyone will call him "sire" and he'll have to deal with all that that entails. Can't say as I blame him for that. Imrahil is bringing Lothiriel, hmmm? Sounds like matchmaking might be afoot.

Aefre's feeling nauseated? What *could* be causing that?

Congratulations on your very well-deserved award, and please update again soon!

person Yanic
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Gamling! Getting himself hurt just in time to reunite with his lady!