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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The idea of the story is good but the grammer is ..... not very good with the wrong tenses used. The English is also too formal. I'm guessing that English is your seond language??? But with some good Beta-ing it would be much better.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome story! can't wait to read some more. keep writing! :)
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I read all the chapters to this story! So far all good!! Well maybe not...But thats only because of Vig. Another then that all good!! Why did you stop though?!! Keep writing!! Update soon!! UPDATE NOW!!! XD Umm...Sorry about that I got alittle out of hand....Please update soon!! This story is really good!! Keep it up!!
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL, by the end of that chapter MY heart was pounding too! VERY, VERY GOOD!!!!!!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You gotta update, its such a beautiful story !!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH, Hunny, the suspence is KILLING me! HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!