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I love this story!!!!!! It's soooo unusual and soooo well written! I can't say enough good things about it.......Without losing the Tolkien "canon credibility", you sucessfully tranferred the true essence of both Eomer and Legolas into this highly entertaining and extremely creative new domain. *WOW* It's so believable... and these two are sooo hot together *drool*.... they burn... *ooOOoo, Cold shower...Cold shower.....* ;) I hope you're planning on continuing the story, The epilogue left it wide open...*darnit!*... and I'm dying to find out who was in the hall...... Bravo, Magnifique, Fantastic...etc, etc....

This is truly a magnificent piece of writing. Both the characters of Legolas and Eomer are strong and interesting. I particularly like the Elvishness of Legolas. He is as mysterious as he is beautiful. We are always left wondering what lies beneath the controlled exterior. And thet is the crux of the matter, Legolas is always in complete control, even of his own emotions. This story was very well thought out. There is a deliberateness to it as controlled as Legolas. Eomer is equally impressive. Even in his most unsure and confused state, he is quite restrained. Both these characters give off an air of barely restrained power. It seems to be the way you have developed the tension between them. Do we dare hope for a sequel?

Great story! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but it was part my laziness and part wondering where you were going with the plot. You write *very* well and I am overjoyed to see some feelings and emotions with the sex. With that notion, I would very much love to see a sequel (especially since you left it so open!) and I have to admit being a sucker for our guys to have a happy ending. Anyway, great story and I hope to see more from you.

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Err...This last chapter is the epilogue? It seems unfinished. Or can you have an epilogue in the middle of the story? Good story though.

He hee.... Nice little epilogue. I do so hope that it means we shall be treated to a sequel in the future?
Thanks for writing this story. I have enjoyed it very much.

Thank you.... Thank you... at last!

Oh Menel, This is a wonderful story. Legolas and Eomer, two of my favourite men!
Greenwood and Rohan two of my favourite places.........It is beautifully thought out and writtten.. .And the bloody tension.. how can you do this to us? In chapter 9 after they played that lovely game (I want to ask if I can use something similar in my Rohan fic?) when Legolas started dripping the wine onto Eomers skin and licking it off, I thought Oh thank God AT LAST, I don't have to wait breathless with anticipation any longer..and then you dropped us all in it. I wanted to cry when Eomer got dressed and stalked off..so sad, so painful, so lovely too! This is driving me insane, but I am very excited about the
Rhovanion and I wish you would let Wilhelm get together with the elvish captain, instead of smacking both their wrists. Ok I know you have your reasons and it fits with the whole tone of the thing but for goodness sake my tongue is hanging out here. Can't wait for more.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why must you torture me so, Menel? So much happens in just one chapter, yet it's NEVER enough! I drink but still I am parched! What's so special about Eomer's place? IS that where he first had sex, or where he feels at one with nature? And di he and Leggy get up to anything? Are they REALLY going to see Gimli? Or going to sneak off back to the special place? And, this new guy that Echuir likes, interesting, but I bet Eomer's cousin is going to have a few coarse words to say before this all ends.

So, please Menel, tell me you have another chapter ready to put up soon, else you shall only extend my torture! (What have I ever done to you to deserve this? *pouts*)

Luv Mawgy

*Really* good story!