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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person Mirasaui
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aiya,isseissed a lot! Four chapters to read to catch up. Legolas has born his and Glorfindel's son, but his life hangs in the balance. Celeborn, Thranduil and Elrond have given up the reign of their realms to Legolas and Glorfindel which will unite the three into one Elven Kingdom. Filgree survived (Yea!) and this wonderful story is about to come to its end. Quite a tale I must say, and I have enjoyed reading every word. I look forward to the final chapter(s) and the conclusion. This one is definitely a gem in my book!
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Lego's gonna be king. It's so cute how you made his charecter grow in this story. One second he's just a cute bubbly little virgen and the next he's te exact opposite. : )
person sami
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GO painkillers, do your thing!!!!! *sitting in shock that Thranduil actually acted with common sense and humility & did the best thing for everyone** Amazing chapter, I think I need to reread it just to get it all in my head. Can't wait for more!
person Kryspen
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful... wonderful.... ^_^
person teri
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Total shocker. Very impressive. This was one ofr mor more excellent chapters. I have read almost all LOTR slash and het and I'm fairly certain no one has ever come up with the story line in which the rulers of the elven realms give up their power to anyone ever. This entire story has been a fascinating ride and I certainly hope you are prepared to start another story for us all. I would hate to think you would stop writing after this. Please tell me you have plans ready for more writing after this story ends.
Take Care,
Teri
person Starwind
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well all that brain power worked b/c the chapter came out really good! I'm so sad the end is just around the corner!! It just can't be!
person giggle
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH drugs. They are such a good thing. The only reason I am on my feet, well on my keister actually cause I am in my computer chair, right now is because of glorious painkillers.
Yes it was a very satisfying chapter. You got Legolas High King of the Elves and his son will be his heir and help his adar in bringing all the elves together. Everyone gets to be with their lovers or at least gets to live the life they want to live. The orcs aren't going to be a problem for a long time and maybe they can wipe them out before they breed anyway.
Now we just need to get to Legolas and have a happy extended family reunion and name that baby.
Isn't Thranduil happy? I am sure Haldir is jas tas thrilled to be a grandfather or whatever. I simply cannot call the male maternal elf a mother. Blame cultural conditioning.
Thank you for all the work and I bet you are glad to have this turning out in such a good way. We appreciate all the brain time you have use ent entertain us.
I can't wait too see how you end this. giggle
person louise_oblique
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*King Legolas Greenleaf * *dances* fantastic, now I hope he survives and please to a sequal or epilogue, way way cool. brilliant chapter, I loved it

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louise
person Vuaryn
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chap 138*

Hey woman! You've done it again. I was at the edge of my chair when I read this last chapter. Man, you are excellent, when it comes to cliffy. I can't wait to hear more from you. I can relate to the wrist aching thing. Keep it up girl, you are the best! I can't wait to read if Glorfindel will reach King Legolas in time. Also, I wonder what they will name their son? More soon.
person Tanesa
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave the end hanging! That would be much too cruel after you have written such a great story- and a really long one at that- but one I have ejoyed. Poor Legolas! I share your feelings on children by the way. I am sorry about your wrist- I just recently got the stitches taken out of my hand- a cut that infringed on my abilities to type as well as other important abilities. But anyway- love the story- please update as soon as your wrist and time allow. I'm practically begging!