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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person Twilight
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A truly fabulous story with love, sex, adventure, action, angst etc with terrific character development and imaginative plot twists and turns. Beautiful emotional nuances in your characters in their thoughts, feelings and actions that causes us to care for all of the elven characters. Although there were a huge number of chapters, each chapter made the story more complete, was never extraneous, and was always well-done. A gigantic thank you for updating on a fairly regular basis and for actually completing it!

( P.S. Thanks for throwing in the passionate sex scene with Filigree and Lindar. I'm so happy these two lonely elves found each other as friends and lovers. Yay for your scene with Elrohir falling in love with Figwit. Never felt comfortable about him lusting for Celeborn. Also, I love that Elladan is so happy with Orophin and there was a nice scene with them too.)

I hope you will consider doing a sequel, and I will look forward eagerly to reading any other stories that may may write. Lastly, BRAVO for a tremendous story!
person Teri
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry, I can't believe its ended. What a great ride! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Please more. In the mean time, while you are thinking about the sequel, you could also write other fics. No pressure! :):):) I am truly going to miss running home from work to check and see if you posted a new chapter. Its been a great pleasure reading this fic and I hope to see more. Take a deep breath and relax. I will keep checking this site for more of your wonderful writing. I noticed you said you were looking for places to archive this fic. You probably know of these sites already but I thought I would throw them your way just in case. http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/
http://www.libraryofmoria.com/
http://www.melethryn.net/melethryn.html
and Elf on a Shelf
Good luck to you, sweetie. Feel free to e-mail me and let me know where you are going to archive and update me on any new fics you write. Take care,
Teri

person BookWorm
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As per your request I'm reviewing this chapter. Even though I really REALLY want to read the next one. Which explains this sucky review. You kick ass! Your fic rocks! Legolas is far too young even for his elf age, he strikes me as a really innocent 12 year old. You misspelled Gil Galad a ways back. Also, your spell checker works but you need to proof read to make sure that the corrected word is the one you want. Can I go back to your fic now? Please please please PLEASE! Thank you!
person kawaiishinichan
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I love it! Beautifully written.
person giggle
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it is certainly smelling of April and May in Imladris. I must be something inthe water. I think everyone is acting so goofy in love. It is sweet. giggle
person Shanna
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM


Wonderful story. A sequel, please...
person Avari
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When is everyone going to get off their hand and mighty know-it-all perches and realize that Legolas is far too young to have this kind of responsibilty thrust upon him? He has just gained his freedom and they're already stealing it away from him? Can't he just live life without being manipulated by prophecy and 'all-knowing' bastards?

Sorry, but I had to say that. I love this fic and I hope that things get better for Legolas.

Update soon.

Oh, it's Rumil, not Rumli.
person Starwind
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Only 2 left?! I just can't beleive it! Oh i really think u should write qualqual! That would be fantastic!!
person Ithilness
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow !!! This is the longest fic I've ever read [and it's not even finsihed *_________*] . Great plot, great character development, and totally adorable Legolas !!! *squishes him* This is one of the best Glorfy/Leggy fics I've read. ^^ Oh and the Elf lovin' scenes are great too. XD Looking forward to the end. XD
person Dave
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi I have just Started Reading your story it has taken me a wekk of near solid reading to reach the last chapter it is one of the best stories i have ever read! Are your next few chapters going to have filigree and Lindar pairings because i would like to hear more aboot them!