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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person Mawgy
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!

Sorry, that's all I can bring myself to say right now. That, and I t I n I need to curse in Elvish right about now. Or English. Or Japanese. Or just any other language possible!

Oh, and trust me, you're not the only one who's so wrapped up in your storyline and happy that you're writing until 2am. I am too! (And I'm sure there are a lot of others aswell).

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read more. (Sorry for the short review (again), but I gotta finish this essay!)

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Ok, I think I'll heed your warnings from now on and not jump to conclusions again!
person _Gilraen_
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LORD CELEBORN??????? what on midddle earth does HE have to do with legolas? Yes this is a big big riddle and i didn't expect it... o my god now i have no idea at all how Legolas is ever gonna be saved...
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Celeborn? Why is he there? Please, update soon.
person Vermillion
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arrrrrgh!!! That was cruel and unusual!! What in Hades is going on? What is Celeborn doing there? We wantssss to know, we wantsss an update soon.
person Mawgy
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just out of curiosity, is it possible that it was Lord Celeborn Legolas ran into while trying to escape back in Sailstown?
person Nina
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It seems that Glorfindel arrived just in time. I hope he can find out soon that legolas is there.
person Mawgy
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No offence, but the Legolas abuse didn't seem as bad as what I thought it would be when you gave out the warning. I was thinking he'd be raped in front of the guests at dinner before everyone got their chance with him or something. And then there'd be stuff that involved BDSM. Just thought I might point that out to anyone readers who may be reading this review and was put off by the warning. It's not as bad as it may seem.

GLORFINDEL'S HERE! WOOHOO! I was wondering why, with Leggy screaming the house down, Glorfindel may not hear hit wit was because he wasn't there yet! But now he is, and now he can finally save the day! I realise that there's probably gonna be some more tension-building strategies you're gonna use to delay the rescue, but I'm just SO excited!

"Apart from that don't jump to any conclusions yet a rea reading this chapter until you read the next part, as all will be explained and revealed then!!!!!!!" what? Awww, you're mean! How can you do this to us (but more importantly, me!)? Now you have me quivering with suspense! Well, just please hurry up and post the next chapter, and the one after that, then the one after that and just keep going until it's all finished! Please?

Anyway, loving this fic (now definitely my number 1 fic that's still be done (WIP in otherwords)), and I can't wait to read more.

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Sorry for the short review, I just REALLY need to get on with my essay.
person Vermillion
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering some of those questions in your A/N. I figured Legolas was not too innocent to realize that giving his real name in his situation would not be the wisest thing. I'm glad Thranduil has a reason for what he is doing. He doesn't strike me as a dumb elf. I'm very excited that you will be updating more frequently. This is a great story and I'm dying for more. Imagine my discontent when I couldn't get onto aff.net for two days. Please write fast.
person Mawgy
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was kinda expecting it, kinda not. Sort of a gut feeling that there's gonna be a twist, but not that that would be it! So, kinda took me by surprise, but not totally.

I'm glad your little finger is better. Mainly because it means I'll get more fixes from now on (So distraut when I couldn't get on to aff.net. I thought it would never be back! I was so tense during the whole ordeal... *shivers* But let's not think about such dark times because it's back, and you're back and whole again! Yay! I feel like celebrating!), and also because I'm sure it would have been very painful for you. And no one likes to be in pain, do they?

Ok, back to the review.... (I keep seeing this bad habit of mine pop up where I go way off track! I'll try to avoid it as much as possible, but I can't swear to anything) (See! There (and here) I go again!) *trying to focus now* Yes, Leggy.... Awww, I feel so much pity for him right now. What with being a prisoner, and having to wear a collar and a leash. Yet, I feel worse about him not knowing what will be required of him! I hate to think of what it will be like when his master's wishes are made clear. And when he said "I do not know many songs and while I play the harp I am not very entertaining.” my heart just sank, and flew at the same time! There's just something devilly delicious about naievity.

But, oh God! I wish I could be the one to kiss all his tears away. But, I guess I'll just leave that to Glorfindel. Stupid Wargs. Why did they have to come and ruin everything? (Rehtorical question: the answer so abviously being to thicken the plot (and annoy the hell outta me!).

Congrats on getting all your exams and stuff done. I still have 1 essay (due Friday, 3000 words, haven't started), and 2 exams (16th and 23rd of this month) and then I get 6 weeks off! How about you?

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter (seriously, can't wait! I feel the absolute NEED to know what's gonna happen when Glorf and Erester see Keeldon), so, until then, seeya, and please, make it soon!?

Luv Mawgy.

P.S. Thanks for all the answers to our questions, it's so nice of you.

P.P.S. What about the real Filgree? Are we gonna find out soon what became of him? Or do we have to wait in suspence until Leggy gets back to Mirkwood? (Your call, just curious).
person Mawgy
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to mention, thanks for pointing thout out about Thranduil. It's nice to know someone agrees with me (kinda). And, seeing as it is the author herself, just makes me feel extra special (and right!) lol