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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person pris
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this just gets better and better! i 't w't wait for the
fireworks between glorfindel and legolas and the troubles this union wprodproduce
i love that lego is soo innocent and glor is so wise i think it will be a great couple
person _Gilraen_
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heehehehe that with Glorfindel in dress is hillarious!! I know the women in that time did not have that kind of dresses but i can't help myself and imagine Glorfindel with a huge light pink dress!!!! LOL

Other ways great chapters and will wait till next update!!!!

And just a question, how many more chrs wrs will there be before the end?
person Mawgy
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thankyou for the update! And don't worry, it wasn't boring, it's all important to the plot. I am SO loving this story!

God, I swear I alomst cacked myself at the mention of Glorfindel in a dress! Hilarious stuff! Very good. Much amusing.

Ok, well, can't wait for the next update.

Sorry for the short review, gotta study for my exam tomorrow Luv Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I thought it would have been so good if the guards at the gate inquired as to why Glorf didn't have any breasts. I would have loved to see how he got out of that one!

Other than that, loving it!

Luv Mawgy
person Cheysuli
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very magical. Everytime you update, it rains.

Anyways, I love this! Poor Legolas.
person neptuneline
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I jusved ved the Revenge of the Elves upon the dirty, evil Men. Go, Elves!
Celeborn certainly was heroic here, but I am remembering how Haldir said Legolas must remain with the Lord and Lady for awhile. Was Celeborn's sacrifice all that selfless? Am I speculating? Ack!
Great story!
person Mawgy
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thankyou so much for all the wonderful updates! We are unworthy of such generosity, and gratefully accept your mercy.

And, just so you know, it's hard not to speculate when there's some big secret going on that you've stretched out for almost 30 chapters!

Oh, poor Celeborn... all his hard work and planning for nothing! I just felt terrible for him when it was revealed Keeldon had slept with him! That shouldn't happen, especially to Lord Celeborn! I'm just happy he's now dead and out the way! (Keeldon that is, cos it's obvious Celeborn's not dead).

Don't ask me why, but with every thing Legolas does, it just makes me love him more! I mean, death isn't a big thing for me, and if it were anyone else who was screaming just because they had touched someone who was dead, I'd probably hit them! But Legolas? Don't ask me why, but I thought it was really cute!

Just one thing that's bothering me slightly, when did they remove Keeldon from Legolas' body? It might be just me. I was so excited to get 4 whole new chapters that I was admittedly racing through them to find out what happens that I might have missed it. And Elves are meant to be very light creatures, so if Keeldon's body weight didn't hurt Leggy, then I doubt Glorfindel's would have. Unless Glorf was on top of Keeldon, adding more weight to what was there already.... But even so, it didn't mention once Glorf got off Leggy that they rmoved Keeldon from Leggy, so I'm guessing that it was before that they removed him. But, if that were the case, then what about the leash? I thought that was binding them tightly together. And then there's also the additional mention of Glorf's weight.... Unless he accidentily put weight mainly onto Leggy's hips and therefore hurt his pelvis more.... But, I just thought I'd point that out.

Hehe, and I like Erestor's reaction to it all... that's probably what I'd be like.

Oh, and I cracked up laughing at Glorfindel when he said "now grab your sword and start killing things!” My brother even asked me what the hell I was laughing at I was so loud! I just hope hope no cats or dogs got killed, seeing as Glorf wasn't very specific... Still, hilarious stuff!

Ok, now I know you were kind enough to spend all day writing and granted us with 4 whole new chapters, and I really appreciate it, but please give us more! I'm begging you! I NEED IT! (I think I might be addicted to this fic. It's like I need a fix every 10 minutes or I'll go crazy!) So, please, whenever you can, I'd love to read the next few chapters. Thanks (in advance)

Luv Mawgy.
person Nina
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
They will be free now, that's great. But, please, no war.
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* that was so friggen funny! you need to torture legolas more often!
person Vermillion
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness for the update. I thought I was going to go mad when aff.net was down and waiting for the new chapters. I don't think the warning was really necessary. The Legolas abuse wasn't that bad. I'm just relieved Glorfindel came before the warning WAS necessary. Please, please, please let Glory find Legolas. This is great, please update again soon.