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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person Mawgy
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Definitely YAY! Everyone deserves someone to love. So why not Erester too?

Good on Legolas! Finally speaking his mond and standing up to Thranduil! It felt really good. Oh! and I just loved it when Haldir came to Leggy's side when Thrand hit him. Well done.

So that's who Leggy ran in to! Finally I found out! And good twist with the potion, I really liked it.

Well, can't wait for Leggy to be found, seems like it will be a very interesting conversation.

So, keep writing, and I'll keep reading. Seems like a good system, don't it?

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Sorry for the short review, got things to do.
person Mawgy
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, just wanted to say congrats on 100 reviews. It must be so thrilling for you to reach such a milestone!
person star shimmer
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for Legolas finally learning the truth and getting his say to those Elf Lords. Came into this story late, but it's very absorbing with interesting twists.

Although it was wrong of Erestor to withhold information from Glorfindel, I felt bad for his broken heart. A BIG YAH to having someone in love with Erestor! Liked how you did it by the unsigned letter and gift.
person Amlug
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm sitting on pins and needles here. I'm starting to feel sorry for Erestor too. I like the idea of him having a secret admirer. And is Legolas going to be able to have kids? I'm a fan of mpreg, it's always fun to see how an author will have the couple involved react. Your story line is great and the suspensful ending to each chapter keep me on aforementioned pins and needles...they kinda hurt. Can't wait for more. Namarie.
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actualy, i feel bad for Thranduil. All he tried to do was protect his son and now he's being ripped away from him. Poor guy.
person Mawgy
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Oh My God! Oh My God! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

*ahem*

Sorry, couldn't help myself, but I am so close to ripping my hair out at the roots because of you! *points finger accusingly*

Don't worry, all that stuff made perfect sense to me. But I'm not exactly normal so what may make sense to me, might not to others and vice versa, so don't take my word for it or anything.

Oh, I swear, I started crying when Legolas said that all he ever wanted was affection from his father, and here a stranger was receiving it! My heart just shattered at reading that. Yet a ray of hope can be found because somehow I don't think Glorf would ever treat Leggy so unemotionally.

I don't think there hasr ber been a time in which I have liked Gandalf as much as what I do now! All bee ofe of him things make sense and I'm no longer kept in the dark! WOOHOO! At least someone is nice enough to us! Hmph!

Meanwhile, I hope with Leggy's help, Glorf will be back on his feet in no time.

Thanks for the update, please keep writing (but it's not like you're gonna be really horrible and stop wiritng, now are you?)(You're not, right?)

Luv Mawgy

P.S. I can understand why Erester perhaps didn't Glo Glorf everything, but I don't condone it. If Leggy didn't bond with his perfect match then terrible things will happen, right? So, why would Erester risk all the lives of Elves everywhere if he knew he could prevent it? I realise the whole 'love' thing can be hard to get over, but if Glorf is Leggy's one and only mate, then Erester must realise that even if they did get back together, then it wouldn't work out becuase they are not meant to be together. Just a few stray thoughts I had which i couldn't control my fingers from writing, sorry. Just ramblings that wanted to be voiced.
person Edward Uwnhai Silverfang
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I recently started reading this story and at first it put me off I admit, but soon I was bored and started to read it anyways, and now I have come to crave for more chapters, and I am sorry to hear you’re sick. This last chapter, personally, made perfect since to me, and I am now enraptured with it and cannot wait till the update. *Grins* And I too, know how un-obedient words can be, and how you get frustrated and want to kill the stupid thing, lmao. Anyways, I’m rambling here, I love it, want more, and can’t wait….
-Edward Uwnhai Silverfang =)
person Vermillion
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ai, finally some light pierces the darkness. So sorry you were so ill. I was going mad waiting for updates. Poor Glory, hope he gets some good lovin' from Legolas to get him through. Shame on Erestor for not telling Glory about the scroll. It's not too confusing but please hurry with more.
person Nina
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haldir! Why did he never come to Mirkwood to see his son? And Thranduil does he love Haldir? Hadir didn't help legolas when he saw him with those men because he wanted Glorfindel to save him? Now, although I don't agree with what Thranduil has done I can understand it. It was not easy for him too.
person _Gilraen_
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!! All is perfectly clear for my part.... finally i luv Gandalf lol he answered all my questions hehe.. Poor Erestor I don't blame him for not telling all to Glorf cos if he loves him , it's understandable... but wow great I can't wait to see what will happen next! Great work!!!