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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*giggling maddly* I think our littly Leggy is suffering from a bad case of PMS!
person Susanne
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Normally I'm a little reserved about sending feedback but I've just read your answers to some of the reader's questions and can only imagine what might have been said to you. Frankly, I couldn't care less whether your spelling is good, bad or indifferent...this story is wonderful! I read quite a bit of LOTR slash fan fiction and I can't remember the last time I looked forward to updates so much. The interactions between Glorfindel and Legolas are a delight and I love the play between innocence and experience. Your tale is full of suspense, warmth and sensuality and I thank you for writing such a well crafted piece about my favourite pairing.

person gwilith
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been addicted to this story from the beginning and, if possible, love it more every day. I am sorry for my lack of feedback, but this story is much loved and much appreciated. Thank you for it and keep up the good work!
person Aires
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh poor, so innocent legolas..
glad the golden lord is there to show him the way,
but then oh, please let glorfindel be the one for the prince!!
person Mawgy
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed recently, I've been busy, so don't worry, you haven't lost me.

Ok, sorry about this, but when Keeldon asked Legolas if he pleasured himself, Legolas said he did. So how could he only just now be discovering the world of masturbation when he had done it before? (Or at least he said he had. Was he lying? Or did you perhaps forget?)

Anyway, still enjoying this fic very much, can't wait for them to reach Imladris,

Luv Mawgy
person Vuaryn
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*pants*. That was some chapters you have there. Wow! Now, Fligree must be masterful with all his wits and teaching, guiding young Greenleaf there for a release. Nicely written and amazing job describing the details of the ritual. I will be one of those who will be reading this fic till the end. *chp 56*
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I dunno if that was supposed to be funny but it made me laugh to have Filgree explain masturbation to him. That's embarassing!
person star shimmer
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy how your story shows the development of the relationship between Legolas and Glorfindel from attraction to growing love in a realistic manner with it's moments of uncertainty and confusion. Glad Filgree is going to Imladris, have grown quite fond of him. By tBy the way, "boarders" should be "borders", "innocents" should be "innocence" and "Imaldris" should be "Imladris". Hope that was helpful.

person Kryspen
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
riffraff!

You have one helluva story going here. Most enjoyable! great job!

Kryspen
person Vuaryn
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*chap 54*

Whatever you say, Riffraff. You are the boss and whatever you decide, I am sure it will be the best *grins*. I can't wait for the next update. This is one hell of a fic and I can never get enough of it. Keep up the great work! Wow, the Prince had nothing but an overall to cover his nudity *yum*.