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for The Jewel of Mirkwood

by harriet

person louise_oblique
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just have to say fantastic and loved the elvish smut, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! :)
take care sweetie
huggs,
louise
person Maddy
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Still loving the story (not too keen on the incest though). Nice to have lots of happiness and lots of sex!
One small point (and by small I mean very small!). As far as I remember from The Hobbit, Thranduil is actually a blond (and that's probably the reason they gave Leggy blond hair in the film).
person Mirasaui
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow--that was some update! Thank you for including a chapter about Filgree and Lindar. Both Elves deserved a little loving touch. And glad to see Haldir and Thranduil together again, they deserve love too, and their reunion should make things easier for Legolas. Erestor and Elrond's coupling was just hot and steamy--teehee--the lusty pair. And Glorfindel and Legolas, well, they're the reason we're all reading this story, right? So of course, we want a tender love scene between the two. As usual, you've done a great job. Look forward to more.

Mirasuai
person Ealhswith of Skye
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and jump for joy when you update. I read the first 50 chapters in one sitting. Keep up the good work. Oh, and please update again SOON!!!!!
person mirasaui
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What lovely chapters this time! Thranduil and Haldir renew their love, and Glorfindel finally learns about the pregnancy and takes it in stride, or rather delight. The awful men are gone, and for a few days at least, everyone will have some peace. Although there is still a funeral to go through, so sad that Hale's wife had to die. I'm still hoping you will write a bit more about Filgree and Lindar, if not in this story, then maybe in a sequel. As always, look forward to more.

Mirasaui
person louise_oblique
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More totally fantastic chapters. I love mpreg and the characterisations in this fic. hope for more H/T very good. very glad L ok :).
What are u studying at University? I'm doing International Relations and Global Development. So far very fun but umbelierbly heavy, lol and it's only my first year. :)
Will there be a sequal to this fic? U can tell I'm wondering if L will join the fellowship of the ring and if so what will G and his child (grown up child I guess as Estel hasn't come into the picture yet) think. Anyway hope for more. Oh will L or H be having any more children?
Oh I'd love more info on your ideas on male pregnancy, so far seems very good and like the explainations.

take care
louise
xxx
person Shanna
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Maravilloso trabajo. La historia de Haldir y Thranduil me ha encantado, me he emocionado. Y la de Legolas y Glordfindel, es preciosa. Tu historia es extraordinaria, original, y maravillosamente escrita. Felicidades. Espero que aún quede mucho para que se acabe, y si es así, tengo la esperanza de que escribas una secuela o alguna otra historia tan bonita como ésta. Un saludo.
Shanna
person Maddy
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated! Some nice happy, sappy chapters - just what I needed. A bit scared by your AN at the end though! I'm not sure I can cope with anymore angst!
person giggle
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes RiffRaff you are sick and cruel to leave us all hanging. Of course we lit. it. We can chew our nails to the quick while waiting for you to finish your finals. Sigh.
Lovely story and I can really tell that your story telling abilities have improved through the course of writing this. I am enjoying the tale more and more with all the twists and turns. I will admit at first I was getting very confused but I think I have things figured out now. Enjoy your upcoming vacation and I hope you have lots more in store for us. giggle
person Breach Cannon all must die!
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How is Legolas's circut different and why?