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for Just Gone Seven

by MerenwenFefalas

person melanie
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is awfully written, the signs are distracting and i've checked some other stories...thell pll pwp and terribly written as well.
person vestalvagrant
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm not giving five stars to everything, otherwise how could I say 'Is He?' is my favourite? But, ahhhh, stuff like this makes me want to search out sex instead of slash. So be careful what you write! If you keep making lurve look this good you might lose me!
person Kerry ~Aja
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't be bothered to sign in either.. :)

~grins~ I still love this, just read it again.. I like the way it's so.. comfortable.

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