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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! you have to hurry up with the next chapter. Especially after giving us hints of whom she's related to.I know exactly whom she resembles, except for she has the green eyes. Know wonder that you described her as being so beautiful. Hints: I'm not going to mention who I know it is that she is related to. some people may not have gotten it.
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
Finally!!! A fanfic that makes Legolas seem real!! He has been my favourite character since I read the books over 20 years ago and I just adored the movie. I've been a little disappointed with fanfics because they never portrayed him the way I saw him. Until I read yours!!! I'm still in shock!!
Just to let you know, I'm a wr and and would be willing to help you in any way. Not for the credit, just for the fun. I haven't enjoyed fiction so much in ages!!!
As for your characters - they're excellent. You have done what is difficult in writing. Made the characters seem real. The reader should be able to relate to them in a way that they could fully expect to run into them on the street. And you have done that!!! Good s!!
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I'll be waiting for the next chapter with great anticipation. Legolas is such a stud muffin!!! He can shoot his arrows (or anything else of his, for that matter, wink wink wink) at me any day.
Feel free to email me. I'd love to chat!!!
Stacey
poohpah@tbaytel.net
Finally!!! A fanfic that makes Legolas seem real!! He has been my favourite character since I read the books over 20 years ago and I just adored the movie. I've been a little disappointed with fanfics because they never portrayed him the way I saw him. Until I read yours!!! I'm still in shock!!
Just to let you know, I'm a wr and and would be willing to help you in any way. Not for the credit, just for the fun. I haven't enjoyed fiction so much in ages!!!
As for your characters - they're excellent. You have done what is difficult in writing. Made the characters seem real. The reader should be able to relate to them in a way that they could fully expect to run into them on the street. And you have done that!!! Good s!!
!!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter with great anticipation. Legolas is such a stud muffin!!! He can shoot his arrows (or anything else of his, for that matter, wink wink wink) at me any day.
Feel free to email me. I'd love to chat!!!
Stacey
poohpah@tbaytel.net
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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute! This story is really good, and from a point of view very different from any I've read before. Can't wait to read more. Keep Writing.
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May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this.It really looks promising.I like it when Rain won't let get to her just because she's a woman.
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May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very definitely getting interesting, and I like that she has excellent military skills, not a shrinking vt.. t.. Please proceed, I am looking forward to the development of this story.
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May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey just reviewing on your story. I love it. I am always interested in a story when humans from our time gets zapped into middle earth, it always seems to bring excitment to the story. Anyways, the story is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now it is getting interesting. And yes tall is good. what are her fighting skill? Any martial arts?