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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, ignore the flammers. They are just jealouse because they can't write. And I think you should go & flame them if there flamming you.
You guys think that your so cool for dissing someone that worked real hard on there story. You probly have no selfesteam if you have to make people looks bad just to make your self feel good. Your probly fat and ugly and cant get boyfiend. What would you do if poeple just put bad things in your reveiws. If you can't say someting nice than you should keep your mouth shut.
I like your story. Its original and cute.
SO STOP TALKING $hit you @$$holes! Your so imature!
ANd YOUR STORYS PROBLY SUCK YOU NEED TO GET A LIFE!
~*~*ShELlEYBeANz*~*~
You guys think that your so cool for dissing someone that worked real hard on there story. You probly have no selfesteam if you have to make people looks bad just to make your self feel good. Your probly fat and ugly and cant get boyfiend. What would you do if poeple just put bad things in your reveiws. If you can't say someting nice than you should keep your mouth shut.
I like your story. Its original and cute.
SO STOP TALKING $hit you @$$holes! Your so imature!
ANd YOUR STORYS PROBLY SUCK YOU NEED TO GET A LIFE!
~*~*ShELlEYBeANz*~*~
schedule
May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SO STOP TALKING $hit you @$$holes! Your so imature!
ANd YOUR STORYS PROBLY SUCK YOU NEED TO GET A LIFE!
~*~*ShELlEYBeANz*~*~
Oh and THIS is mature? The idea of reviews is for someone to express their opinion. If they don't like it, they're allowed to say so. She can always delete their comments. But as she's told us, she's not going to do that because she doesn't care. And telling people to get a life is the epitome of childish. Just because YOU like it, doesn't mean everyone else has to. So stop with the trying to enforce your (BADLY SPELT) opinions on everyone else. Jeez.
A.C. & S.B.
ANd YOUR STORYS PROBLY SUCK YOU NEED TO GET A LIFE!
~*~*ShELlEYBeANz*~*~
Oh and THIS is mature? The idea of reviews is for someone to express their opinion. If they don't like it, they're allowed to say so. She can always delete their comments. But as she's told us, she's not going to do that because she doesn't care. And telling people to get a life is the epitome of childish. Just because YOU like it, doesn't mean everyone else has to. So stop with the trying to enforce your (BADLY SPELT) opinions on everyone else. Jeez.
A.C. & S.B.
schedule
May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's FLAMING not "flamming", SELF ESTEEM, not "selfesteam", PROBABLY, not "probly", YOU ARE or YOU'RE, not "your", THEIR story, not "there story."
Good grief, woman. Learn to spell yourself, use correct grammar and punctuation in the appropriate places...then tell other people they can't write.
Good grief, woman. Learn to spell yourself, use correct grammar and punctuation in the appropriate places...then tell other people they can't write.
schedule
May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is wonderful, dont pay attention to the flamers, they are people who have nothing better to do but cruise these sites and cause trouble...my only gripe is I canit tit to read the next chapter!!! Pleeeeese update more......you update quicker then most for which I am thankful but not fast enough for me...Im impatient for good reading.....Keep up the good work!!!
schedule
May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg!! big smiles!
I think she shoudl be a elf.
and to you morrons who think your so cool: Ive been to your storys and you guyz can't even spell. so you need to shut the h3ll up. if you don't like this storey stop readin the then, and stop makeing dumb cots. ts.
Sh3LL3YB3ANZ
I think she shoudl be a elf.
and to you morrons who think your so cool: Ive been to your storys and you guyz can't even spell. so you need to shut the h3ll up. if you don't like this storey stop readin the then, and stop makeing dumb cots. ts.
Sh3LL3YB3ANZ
schedule
May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You could do well to learn the difference between "your" and "you're". Once you've learned the difference, youryour newfound knowledge.
Also, even though you protest, this smells of Mary Sue. In fact, the protest probably makes it all the more glaring. You know; methinks he doth protest too much.
The "girl falls in to middle earth" bit has been way overdone. The Mary Sue could be forgiven (well, maybe) if the plot was original.
Try again, and good luck.
Also, even though you protest, this smells of Mary Sue. In fact, the protest probably makes it all the more glaring. You know; methinks he doth protest too much.
The "girl falls in to middle earth" bit has been way overdone. The Mary Sue could be forgiven (well, maybe) if the plot was original.
Try again, and good luck.
schedule
May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
should I tell you about the sheer stupidity of this fic?!
schedule
May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Keep up the good work!
schedule
May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapt0, t0, this has been good and I am enjoying reading it. Since she is in the military it is pleasing to see she has some handhandhand combat skills. I am still interested to see how this will develop and why she came to be in middle earth. Keep writing. :)
schedule
May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHH! I can't believe you left us with a cliffhanger like that, makes us wonder about whats going to happen next between those two. Oh well, I guess I can wait the the next chapter,but hopefully not for long.