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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This is freaking hilarious! I can't believe that girl actually wrote and posted that story - that's hilarious in itself! And then with the MST...I just can't handle it! I hope she posts more soon, so I can read more of this!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a genius at the art of parody. I laughed so hard at some of the comentary I was in tears. Excellent job retaliating for some one mangling you fic. Keep up the good work.
Peace,
Amy
Peace,
Amy
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to all the positive reviews...and to the last one, ummm...well, I don't really know what to say, except perhaps you can show me your own original work so I can learn from you. On a slightly less bitchy note, Antira was the first OFC I created and developed to any degree, so she's bound to be slightly cookie cutteresque and full of fluffy fanfiction angst. Anyway, sorry for the delay in updates, to everyone who is still reading, but the girl hasn't added anything in a long time...maybe she got a clue. =) Love to all my supporters! --Amber
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July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, I have to say that the whole thing is idiotic, not just that horrible story you MSTed, your character Antira sucks big time, a horrible horrible Mary Sue. so both your stories are terrible. sorry.
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading it...I feel so sorry for what the retard did to your story. But your MST-ing is brilliant. I'm sure thele ole of the uni library thinks me and my friend are in by by now becaue we've just been sat here laughing to ourselves.
How could someone call that a serious fanfic? They should be hung, drawn and quartered. Although the beating with the continuity and plausability sticks does seem like a good idea.
How could someone call that a serious fanfic? They should be hung, drawn and quartered. Although the beating with the continuity and plausability sticks does seem like a good idea.
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, all I can say is: I'm not surprised you decided to MST this! The original story is just bad! So bad it's funny! But the MSTing is great. I'm actually looking forward to her next chapter just to see the continued MST!
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh you poor boubbie... You must have cried when you saw what this girl did to Antira. My eternal organs are aching for you.
Just as well you can unite the fanfic community in scorn for this girl. Your biting MST is brilliant.
Just as well you can unite the fanfic community in scorn for this girl. Your biting MST is brilliant.
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've read about half of the first part.. ~wiping tears from my eyes~ Tears at how downright awful the story is, and tears of laughter at the wonderful MST-ing.. I will read the rest, but not till later when I can share it with my sister so that we can both point and laugh.
Sheesh.. Makes you wonder wha goi going on in some people's heads, doesn't it?
I agree.. whoever wrote this needs to go back and do some basic English language lessons again...
Sheesh.. Makes you wonder wha goi going on in some people's heads, doesn't it?
I agree.. whoever wrote this needs to go back and do some basic English language lessons again...
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the most hilarious MST's I've read in a while! You've got to love those Elvish-Princess-Ringbearer-Warriorgirl types, don't you?
Cheers!!
Sonja
Cheers!!
Sonja
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I read this, I was constantly caught somewhere between laughter and tears.
I wanted to laugh because someone had written this, let alone written it seriously! The fact that they even thought about this, let alone posting it, is enough to send me into a hysterical fit of laughter.
I wanted to cry because as an Englishman, I feel disgusted that my language could be butchered and abused in this way. I'm sure any English-speaking person can understand. And, as a fanfiction writer, I feel sickened that someone could write this and mock every decent fanfcition writer out there thusly. This is so clichéd, it's beyond plot (not that there was any evidence of there being one in the firstplace) and frankly, if you're going to write so horrendously, you could at least be consistant.
On the other hand, the thought of mire elves, eternal organs, Antira (I'm sorry but your character has been insulted beyond repair here) and her stomach arrow (though shouldn't that be 'arrows' now?) keeps me laughing throughout stressful times.
Forget about giving this writer English lessons, give them a brain! They are sorely in need of one. Maybe then they might delete this whole travesty and spare the whole world this kind of torment.
However, seeing as that will never happen, I look forward to and yet fear what total bullshit will appear next.
I wanted to laugh because someone had written this, let alone written it seriously! The fact that they even thought about this, let alone posting it, is enough to send me into a hysterical fit of laughter.
I wanted to cry because as an Englishman, I feel disgusted that my language could be butchered and abused in this way. I'm sure any English-speaking person can understand. And, as a fanfiction writer, I feel sickened that someone could write this and mock every decent fanfcition writer out there thusly. This is so clichéd, it's beyond plot (not that there was any evidence of there being one in the firstplace) and frankly, if you're going to write so horrendously, you could at least be consistant.
On the other hand, the thought of mire elves, eternal organs, Antira (I'm sorry but your character has been insulted beyond repair here) and her stomach arrow (though shouldn't that be 'arrows' now?) keeps me laughing throughout stressful times.
Forget about giving this writer English lessons, give them a brain! They are sorely in need of one. Maybe then they might delete this whole travesty and spare the whole world this kind of torment.
However, seeing as that will never happen, I look forward to and yet fear what total bullshit will appear next.