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Wow!

This is BRILLIANT!!!

I have to say that I never wanted your first series to end it was soooo good, but all good things come to an end I guess....I guessed wrong!

This is wonderful and as captivating and sensually diverse as your first. Brutal last chapter though, not that I'm complaining. It is wonderful to finally read exactly what took place that fateful day and whilst Glory turned into a complete and utter bastard, which surprised even himself, I think it wonderful to see just how his mind works and what his motivations were.

He really scared himself. The part where when violated Legolas and there was no scream was so powerful I wanted to scream! The way you wrote it I empathised with Legolas so much and the cold horror of Glory realising what he had done and that Legolas was, well starting to fade yes? His whispered pleas to his father were so powerful, you really know how to write this stuff!

I can hardly wait for the next part!

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I want more. Please, update as soon as possible.

Oh OUCH....

OK, this chapter sheds a Lf lif light on some of Glorfindel's reactions in "Anestel", and on Legolas's reactions as well. Glorfindel bun bundle of HUGE contradictions, and extremely tangled emotions; I really, really like that. Nothing one-dimensional there! I'm glad he realized in time that he was behavas bas badly as the people at whom he was so angry! But I do fear, in retrospect, that if he *did* know this was Thranduil's son from the very start, he either would have indeed raped Legolas in pure anger and then possibly even have killed him, or he would have taken him prisoner--and much, MUCH worse things would have awaited him in Rivendell. Ooo, plotbunny, makes me wonder what would have happened if he had known from his spying.... ;-)

Literally, Legolas being pregnant with Glorfindel's son is the ONLY thing that let him live long enough for Glorfindel to work up an attachment to him, to learn to love him and desire him--and thus to give Legolas a chance, for apparently the first time in his life, to have someone care about HIM and him only (I recall Glorfindel's line about Legolas not realizing his own worth because he is capable of bearing children....)

Will we learn why it is that Thranduil despises his youngest son so much?

ah this is just so well written!! I can ine ene every singl detale, the poor prince lying there crying :( this glorfindel is a bastard though somehow if he is nice it's just not him and it will kind of change the whole fic...please write more soon!! And if posible after this fic to write what happens to legolas after all?? About his archery lessons and stuff pleeeease *wink wink* :) U are planning to write more right???

oh man.
this is just... yeah... wow.
i really love this. man,
continue quickly!

gabe

Interesting start! I would love to read more! Poor Legolas... :)

Oh my goodness.... I thouI miI might check tonight to see if you had started the prequel, and Look! You have!! I'm delighted!

Poor little Legolas... so young, so innocent, so alone.... so... ripe....

*slurp!*

Very nice so far! More please????

I just loved it.

@ C.M. Janburfry: Wow, I've brought someone to read slash? He he... I'm feeling proud now! :)

@Elflover: Well, Glorfindel was diving, so Legolas only saw him when he came up. And the reason for Glorfindel being there will be explained within the next chapter. ;) I don't know yet if it will be finished today as I don't feel particularly well, but I'll upload it tomorrow at the latest (or whenever that is in your timezone *g*)

@Anita: You have to consider that he is still extremely young, and scared and alone -- he only wanted to ensure his child's survival, that is why he did what he did in Anestel, at least at the beginning. He is also starved for affection and so falls under Glorfindel's spell so quickly...

*duh* never mind.... spring-storm.... (Thanks for putting it at the end of the chapter... somehow missed it the first time....)