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for Ethuil'waew

by Esteliel

person Vuaryn
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Boy, I am so mad at Glorfindel now. How could he? First he stole Legolas's innocence, now he forced him to enjoy it. This is good. Update soon.
person C.M. Janburfry
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O*ouc*ouch* sounds painful. I cringe at the thought of blood or pain. *cringe* Ok sorry, another brilliantly realistic and refreshing chapter. Bravo! but *oww* Update soon!
person Elflover
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
@JastaElf -- Intriguing ideas, there! If Glorfindel had indeed known Legolas' identity, at a minimum he would carried him off to Imladris; he'd be too valuable a hostage to miss! (Not knowing of the family dysfunction, presumably...) Considering that Legolas would resist the abduction, one could well imagine a rape in that scenario, due to Glorfindel's temper (and drive towards dominance). Once the prize was secure at Imladris, we can well imagine what the higher Elves (those sitting at Elrond's table) would want to do (having seen this at the identity revelation scene in Anestel). Hostages don't seem to fare too well in Imladris (witneeleieleirdur)! Meanwhile Elrond would have started attempted negotiations with Mirkwood, and there thought fails me. Would Thranduil really abandon Legolas? And if so, *shudders* to what sort of fate, and for how long? At some point, pregnancy would ensue, and then what? There presumably would be no certainty as to the sire... would Glorfindel claim him at that point, with (only) future childbearing in mind? And if so, then what fate for the first child? *shudders*

On the other hand, supposing none of this had happened (the encounter with Glorfindel).... It doesn't look like Thranduil would ever intend to train Legolas as his birthright would warrant.... so there you would have a life wasted, guarding horses and o low low-level tasks, without parental love, without friendship, without a lover, and presumably long-term, without even the affectif hif his brothers. So bleak and sad!

I really hate to say it *slaps own face* but maybe, in the long run *slaps face harder*, Glorfindel was the best possible thing to happen to Legolas. *a slave in a d/s scenario the best possible thing... shudder... must. go. bleach. out. brain....*
person Elflover
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 2...

Well done, Esteliel.

person C.M. Janburfry
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Legolas.... Please update!
person Vuaryn
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Esteliel

Great job on the sequel. Bad Glorfindel, such cruelty. Angst, can't get enough of it. More soon.
person Vuaryn
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Opppssss///.....I meant prequel.
person Elfishgal
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oi! that was awesome! can't wait till chapter three! you rock!
person Anita
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He actually has a conscious...I think. I do not think this will be as long as Anestel is, but even thought it will be short, I am glad you have written this. It shows that, however shallow and tortures he might seem, Glorfindel does have some sort of feelings inside, that is good to know...
person RONKNIGHT
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MYYY FAVVV PAR5T WASSSSSSSSSSS

PIPPIN: DID YOU LIKE THAT FRODO BITCHHHHH!!

FRODO: I SURE DID

UNZIPS HIS PANTS EVEN THOUGH THEY ARE ALREADY UBNZIPEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

THANKS FOR THE PORN ;}{