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Ooh. I'm on Ch.22 now and Oh My Valar! A/L are getting touchy... I like it! ^o^ What an evil little cliffhangou lou left us with on that chapter. -_- Tsk tsk tsk... I can't wait 'till the next one to see what happened to Legolas. O.o

I love this story:)

Ahh, yes. The long awaited kiss scene! Nicely done! Not way over the top, in fact it was rather chaste, but still conveyed both Aragorn's and Legolas' feeling well. Thanks for making Legolas make the first move. Since he was raped and all, it should be him who is taking action for a while. Let him gain his confidence back, okay?

Still a major lack of "Aragorn Finding Out About Legolas' Heritage", but I'll live. For now. I guess that's going to be saved for an important scene later, huh? Well, I'll tough it out.

I'm glad you showed a deeper, more caring side to the dreaded Ellandan and Elrohir duo. Those two are great. I'm glad Legolas finaly got some of that depression off his chest. Elbereth nows that's been bugging everyone.

By coinsidence I was listening to Final Fantasy 9 MIDIs while reading the scene where the brothers kind of brake down with Aragorn. One of them seemed really fng, ng, and I though you might like it!
http://www.ffextreme.com/ff9/music/81.mid
It's called "You're Not Alone". Spiffy, ain't it?

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! Your stuff is great!

- Herald-Mage Trainee Soucree Lou

Ahh, yes. The long awaited kiss scene! Nicely done! Not way over the top, in fact it was rather chaste, but still conveyed both Aragorn's and Legolas' feeling well. Thanks for making Legolas make the first move. Since he was raped and all, it should be him who is taking action for a while. Let him gain his confidence back, okay?

Still a major lack of "Aragorn Finding Out About Legolas' Heritage", but I'll live. For now. I guess that's going to be saved for an important scene later, huh? Well, I'll tough it out.
Oh, I almost forgot! I know it's REALLY easy to dismiss Arwen as a bitchy, snobbish whore, but I think it would be kind of nice if you did another scene with her (minus her lover, that half elf dude whatshisface) just thinking and trying to understand what went wrong with her life and Aragorn's. Make her seem less self centered (even if she is), or something like that. She has the potential to be a good character, but she needs a little enlightenment. Could you do that?

Thanks for asking your friend about the other story. I understand that real life gets in the way. I'll wait patiently for it. I'm able to survive as long as this story keeps being updated. ^o^ I read the update from your site and that chapter was beautiful with the sort of 'dream world' that Legolas was able to visit with Aragorn, but I won't say more because people here probably haven't read it yet. I can't wait until the next chapter. I love how A/L's relationship is progressing. ^o^

Yeah, Kissing. I see that you have plenty of reviews now. And even a few that can't read, what with the AU warnings and all, sheesh. The twins are defininetally getting more likable. What did you do with Arwen, put her in the closet for later? Update soon.

Ooh, could you ask your friend then if she will ever update the 'Enslaving Legolas' story? ^o^ Anyway, like always, I keep up with your story on your website and all I have to say is that you left the last chapter at a most interesting place. It's like I can almost smell the conspiracy. Hmm... I wonder, or maybe I'm just reading too much into things, lol. Either way, your chapters keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work!

I just started reading this fic and somethiong really is in my eyes so i had to point it out...it is not FARAMIR who died in the fellowship but Boromir.. yeah that's it

Hmm ok i saw your note for the boromir faramir thing...well it's all too mixed up..if legolas is there then who was in the fellowship on his place?...

So, the twins have a heart(indeed two hearts). Please, continue it.