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Aragorn/Legolas relationship is improving. I like that.

what happened to chapter five

Consider that there are more than one types of elves Arwen is Noldor and Legolas is Sindar. She might not even consider him kin or kindred

Very good chapter! I pity the twins they seem so hurt, Aragorn must find and punish people who did this to them. More of Legolas/Aragorn in next chapter, please.

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Well who wouldn't be jealous of two creatures that sleep between an elf's legs. And about Elladan, I will personaly kill who hurt my (other) baby!

Cute chapter! Poor Elladan! I want more Aragorn/Legolas.

I've been putting off reading this fut kut know that i did i'm obseesed with it! Blackspot and wiz are soooooooo cute! *squeal*

I hope Legolas is all right and Aragorn can find him soon.

Things seem to be improving between them.