rate_review Reviews

Good, story, nice angsty. I just love that. However, you seem to have mixed up Rohan and Gondor. Or perhaps you did it on purpose. Boromir and Farmair are from Gondor, not Rohan. And the White city of Minas Tirith, the capital of Gondor, has seven levels. I have never heard of Edoras, the capital of rohan having three of moe levels.
but otherwise a really good story. I'll start reading the sequel now.

Before this I had never read a fic from aragorns point of view, but I really enjoyed this I look forward to reading the fic's that follow, keep writing :)