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for Ring Around the Merry

by emma

person Aratlithiel
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good teamwork, girls. I'm getting very wrapped up in this story and hope the chapters continue coming promptly! I need to go and get a glass of water now. Waiting impatiently for ch. 6...and 7, 8, 9...
person Aratlithiel
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Compelling plot and lovely writing structure. Looking forward to further chapters.
person Mistress Brandybuck
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think I beato ito it tho, I joined one of the groups, can't remember which one (might have something to do ith the fact that I made my own one www.groups.yahoo.com/group/merrydom_pippinbilly) so I've already read what you've done so far (cheeky me) and I must say it is brilliant. keep up the good writing and cond cnd check out my boring monstrocity, which as is, has no members :-(
person Aratlithiel
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*clap* *clap* clap* *clap* Next chapter, please...NOW, please. And to answer your email question, I figure (especially on this particular site) the more smut the better. I don't think you could possibly overdo it for ch. 5. I'm VERY intrigued.
person Mistress Brandybuck
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I'm reviewing on the hope that you'll update, cos this is great stuff. What can I say, I have an unhealthy obsession with hobbit torture and angst. They're just too cute for thier own good. Update! please or I'll set my dragon Thor on u (he's used to eating flames but I'm sure he wouldn't mind a change ;-P