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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to hear Orophin and Elrohir will be showing up in another story along with others. I like how you interweave your pairings in your various stories i.e. In Twilight, The Game.
Although at times, I was a bit frustrated that Elrohir was so confused about his feelings and couldn't recognize Orophin was in love with him (why give him a mithril ring, doesn't that mean love or a wish to bond with the other eventually?). Their relationship was not cookiecutter, but unfolded according to their own personalities and different style.
After all of his uncertainities or vagueness in some of the other chapters, I liked very much how this last chapter expressed how much Elrohir missed Orophin.
Looking forward eagerly for your story with Rumil and Lindir. Love both of these characters too.
Although at times, I was a bit frustrated that Elrohir was so confused about his feelings and couldn't recognize Orophin was in love with him (why give him a mithril ring, doesn't that mean love or a wish to bond with the other eventually?). Their relationship was not cookiecutter, but unfolded according to their own personalities and different style.
After all of his uncertainities or vagueness in some of the other chapters, I liked very much how this last chapter expressed how much Elrohir missed Orophin.
Looking forward eagerly for your story with Rumil and Lindir. Love both of these characters too.
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ow Aduial,this is a great ending.They were reunited at Valinor.Superb!!!Don't forget about Twilight.And Rumil/Lindir!Oops,got carried away there.KUDOS!!!
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May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter with a lovely bonding scene between Orophin and Elrohir. Can't wait to read about their reunion in Valinor.
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May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet but sad.They chose to bind themselves even though Elrohir chose to be a mortal.KUDOS!!!Can't wait to read about Rumil/Lindir when you can.
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May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aduial,I saw a fic yours(I think)titled "The Game."Is it yours?I'm liking it.Are you going to put it here his his site?
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is there any chance of you writing about Rumil/Lindir?I didn't know they were paired-up.Please?
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm thrilled you've written a story with Orophin and one of the twins. I also love Rumil too. Enjoy reading your other related stories along with this one too.
Sorry about not reviewing earlier.
Sorry about not reviewing earlier.
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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
At least Elrohir has Orophin(as a lover)and Rumil(as a brother) to comfort them both.Thank the Valar that those men didn't get a chance to molest them.
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April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww no!!!
Brilliant writing as ever; poor Elrohir and Rumil! I hope they'll be alright... and what a time for such a thing to happen! I feel such pity for poor Orophin... Aiya, you sure like big cliffhangers!!!
The wait was worth it, two chapters up, and I was waiting expectantly for only one.
Please, don't be too cruel...!
Update soon!
Waiting on the edge of my seat,
~Siobhan
Brilliant writing as ever; poor Elrohir and Rumil! I hope they'll be alright... and what a time for such a thing to happen! I feel such pity for poor Orophin... Aiya, you sure like big cliffhangers!!!
The wait was worth it, two chapters up, and I was waiting expectantly for only one.
Please, don't be too cruel...!
Update soon!
Waiting on the edge of my seat,
~Siobhan
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April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not Elrohir and Rumil!?Please don't hurt them!Save them!More please!!!