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for In Twilight

by Aduial

person Anon
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"...surprising under the beeches" I think it was more "the surprise he found under some breeches" ........Sorry, I just had to say that. It was too good to pass up.
person Rhiannon
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was me who wrote the smart ass asociation, my computer bliped!!!Anon is NOT my name!!!!
person Lady of Legolas
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad for Elrohir that even though he's bonded to Orophin,he will follow his brother on whateveer decisions he makes.That's true brotherhood for you.
person Casualis
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god! I almost believed you had forgotten us.
Another wonderfully well written part (I must admit it's better than before as I was deprived of it for so long (dark glance toward the cold-hearted author that do not think to the readers' despair).
Love it as usual, even if I was a bit surprised to see Legolas burst in tears. But a so sensitive Legolas is not a bad thing at all.
Thank you very much.
Casualis
person Lady ofolasolas
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My poor Leggy!Missing Elladan so much.More!!!
person Lady egolegolas
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can understand Elladan's apprehension of Legoloinioining the quest.Just don't kill him.
person Casualis
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i was just saying myself that you were late (Usually you publish on sunday, don't you?)
It's still very good, but I found it too short. no, I'm not a spoiled brat, i swear.
Just a "but". I do not understand the explanation from elrond to Legolas when he asked why he had been chosen.
But, i still love your story, it's so well written.
person Casualis
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, well,
dark shadows are approaching. I cannot imagine how Elladan will react when his lover will propose himself to the quest. I'm not sure he will be very happy. I'm sad for them.
I have little else to say. The style is as perfect as usual.
Ah, yes. A reproach. It was too short, too much short for my liking.
Casualis.
person Lady of Legolas
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Libido on over-drive!!!SWEET!!!
person Janie
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story! I love seeing Legolas in a sweet romantic story that's so well written. I'm really looking forward to more updates!