rate_review Reviews

VERY LOVELY.I'VE ONLY READ THE FIRST TO CHAPTERS HOWEVER.I AM SURE IT WILL BE EVEN MORE LOVELY AS IT COMES ALONG.

*rereads chapter 16* |O_o| *Bursts into pealslauglaughter* Oh my lord, that was hilarious. Priceless! Poor Gimli, left out of the loop. God, I can't wipe the grin off of my face! Hee hee hee. And Elladan's portrayal of what Gimli would say. Wait a minute, didn't Haldir & co. tell Gimli about Legolas' relationship earlier. |-_-;| I still can't believe Boromir tried to *ahem* rape Legolas back in whatever chapter. That was a shocker. And you really put a great deal of thought into the conversation that Elrohir & Elladan had when they have to confront their decision. Okay, now to chapter 17...

Made it to chapter 18 before I started to crash... Dang, I wanted to try and finish it before I went to bed. |-_-''| Anyways, That last scene was so sweet and adorable! Can't wait to read the end! Well, actually I HAVE to wait, but at least it's there to reaen Ien I wake up |^_^|.

That was such a sweet ending. |^_^| I enjoyed the read.

I haven't finished reading yet, I'm only about halfway through, but I wanted to make soommeomments before I forget. |^_^| I just wanted you to know that I absolutely adore this story. Especially after the last few chapters I read. I think your portrayal of the 10 year old Estel was perfect. And I guess, now we know where Elrohir's other mithril band is. |^_~| And the Lil' Bree chapter was highly amusing as well. As was the chapter when Legolas asks about Elladan's past. It had me wondering exactly what him and Elladan do with those sweets he referenced... Anyways that's it for now, and only a small bit. I can't very well comment on everything, when I'm so anxious to go and finish reading the rest! |^_^| Thanks for a great read!

Noticed I missed reading your chapter 18 in your final update.

Really liked how you expressed Legolas' growing desperation yet renewed hope as he, Elrohir and Gimli went searching body by body on the battlefield for the missing Elladan.

Although Elladan got swept away by a departing band of orcs, thankfully, he is one terrific warrior to be able to fight them off by himself. Will have to read one of the earlier chapters to see what Legolas' song is about.

Was particularly fond of this chapter. Very fond of this entire story and look forward to re-reading it.

Superb ending!Major KUDOS!!!

Thought the chapter with Arwen was very touching.

Nice scenes where Elladan tells Legolas his decision to sail or not, and where they become bonded. Will have to go back to the earlier chapters, I mistakenly thought they were bonded already in an earlier chapter.

Also, always like reading about what happens to characters after they are in Valinor, as in this case, Elladan and Legolas.

Really enjoyed this story!

Good quiet moments before the battle, especially the interaction with Gimli. He always seems to know what to say to keep Legolas focused.

Enjoy reading this story so much!!

I do hope that you are writing about Rumil/Lindir next.