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by KrystalTheElvishHobbit

person Mist
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know it's probably doubtful you two will ever update now but I remembered reading this story today and came to find it and read it all again... it's definitely an interesting concept and I would love to see more. :]
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!Sorry about the author brother.
I hope you update this story soon.
I hope Frodo,does more spanking on his adopted daughter tiny behind.
When he finally founds out when she's dreaming about
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this story soon
It is very good
Sorry about the author's brother with the kidney problem
person HyperHenry
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi All Reviewers! :-)
I'm the co-author of this story, and may I say: Super-thanks for all the kind comments.
I can understand if some of you are awfully impatient - we have been taking our sweet time. MY only excuse is that I'm without computer these days (I'm typing this from my work place). In fact, I'm without residence - LOL. Some day, however, I will move into my new house and pack out that computer, and then things might start to happen.
And my co-author? Well, you will have to ask her. ;-)
Cheers for your interest. :)))))))
HyperHenry
person Lidra
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is excellent. I hope you post soon.
person Eh
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Any chance this story is going to get updated in the next century?
person Araniel
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I command you to update at once!

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;_; Pwetty Pwease with Frodo spankings on top?
person MB
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::cries:: Please update! ;_;
person tig
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a very...erm...interesting? story...poor Alana! :-D I just keep wondering when you're going to return her to adult form. I mean, I love the poor "kid's" interactions with her environments @ the other hobbits, but (if I can be blunt) I don't think you're going to be able to progress at all with the relationship between Frodo and Alana until he at least learns something about her true past. I'm not saying that there's anything wrong with what you've written so far -- I just think it's time to move on. Alana's very much attracted to Frodo, but he adores her as a father would adore a daughter. End of story. Really, I'm not complaining, just making a point -- I'm worried that if you drag out her artificial childhood, you'll lose some of the momentum of the story.
Oh, and could you please email me when you update? Thanks! And really, congrats on what you've done so far.
person Nike
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. I'm really enjoying it. I hope you post more soon.