rate_review Reviews

This is a really good story Please! update soon.

Lovely update, cant wait to see how it continues

This is goood keep it up I am dying to know the out come of the story

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

¡¡ HELLO!! I don't know what ideas are already burning in your mind but i hope you're planning a very painful death or punishment for Thomas 'cause he's such a a big bastard!! Of course before the time of punishment comes, you can still use him to create more trouble 'cause i don't think scum like him can just walk away without a vengeance . I agree with you: hurting Legolas with torture or rape it's not a nice idea being pregnant ( by the way : I LOVE MPREG fics). I think your fic has just the right combination fo drama and fluff stuff. The plot, so far, seems very fine to me, specially the way or the reason why Legolas decided to leave Aragorn. What's gonna happen when Aragorn finds out that his step father and husband slept together?? Will he ever find out at all?? Legolas MUST forgive Aragorn BUT ONLY AFTER A VERY DRAMATIC STRUGGLE. Aragorn's dream it's BEAUTIFUL and MUST COME TRUE... in the end. I would love to see Legolas' delivery of his baby though i know it can be very hard writing 'bout it. Finally... I LOVE TWINCEST!!! After all it's only love, no matter what. I BEG YOU!! Call the muses and keep writing, your fic deserves to be finished 'cause it's AWESOME!!! Namarie!! P.S. english isn't my native tongue, so we share something else, don't we?

This is a wonderfull story, I absolutely love it. I am also a huge fan of MPreg and I must say that I love the way you're develping the story. I don't usually read Lord of the Rings but this is one of the very few exceptions.
Though there is one comment I would like to make, your story plays on emotions such as love and anghst and there could be some improvement there in the description. A great story is the one that makes the reader cry for the character (like real tears) because he/she is feeling those emotions from the writing. Now, I see that you're trying to do that but you're not quite there and that's what you have to improve.
Good Luck and I hope to see more of this story!

Love it!Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yes. I liked this one better!!!! The last chapter was good but this one shows more progress in the story line. Its also quite sexy!!!!
I'm looking forward to seeing the story move on now they have arrived at their destination...... and, I assume the eventual arrival of Aragorn to see Legolas.

Well you might consider it writers block - btut I still enjoy reading what you have written!!! I regularly check to see when you have added a new chapter and I'm very keen to see how this story eventually pans out :o)
Keep up the good work!!!!

I'm loving this story soooo much!! I'm just dying to see Legolas and Aragorn back together!! I'm getting so into this story! I can't wait for tham to be DADDDDDDDDIES!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!