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for Meleth-nin

by laeglass

person Kaiyon
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it would do to be at a scene where Legolas's party is attacked and either he or Lord Elrond is seriously wounded. JUST DON'T KILL THE BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Have them attacked by the orcs you mentioned in Ch. 16 and have them ride to Rohan for aid while Aragorn is away fighting or something. I am good friends with Twilights Bane and she approves of this idea, Email me if you chose to use this idea.
~Kaiyon
person Ima
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool!I know how you feel,by the way are you planning to write legolas giving birth in Rivendell or you just skip to the part where he is holding the baby?
person Twilights_Bane
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another awesome chapter. Poor Elrond... so worried for his sons, but it makes it better for us readers! ^_^ lol. Anyways, keep it up, and please update soon.


Best Wishes,
-Twilight's Bane.
person Jackie
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wonderful - love your story and I'm keen to find out if Aragorn wins Legolas back or not. Nicely setting out the scenes too, with good detail making the possibilities in further chapters broader. Look forward to the rest!!
person Naira
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again wonderful, i like what you did with the twins :) works good for the story
person Naira
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bounces* Such lovely chapter again, I love it still *Smiles* Please update again soon ;)
person Twilight\'s_Bane
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More chapters!! ^_^ Finally, Aragorn stopped being a blinded fool and got rid of that Thomas bastard! Please write more soon!!!! ^_^

-Twilight's Bane
person Mereneith
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oouuuhhh!! I loved chapter 13 and 14! Please update soon. I can't wait for more!!
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story you are writing and do hope in the end everything will be okay.
person Naira
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update, you really make me curious as to what's next, pleaaaaaaaaaaase update again soon :p