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for Meleth-nin

by laeglass

schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this story!! maybe a sequel, maybe a new story, this time pair Haldir with someone. Boromir, maybe, or Eomer. We need more elves in these stories, but what can ya do? You work with what you have. Keep up the excellent writing, and I'm looking forward to another like this one. Great story!!!! :-)
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i swear... i just reread this for, like, the 6th time, and i still love it!! so cute, so sweet... ARGH love it!!!!

There were a few grammar mistakes (cant remember where they were at, though) but a whole lot less than what most other authors have!!

very good, very amazing! i love it!!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! I loved this story so much!!! needless to say; if any other story of yours catches my interest, i will be staying up yet another night.
You do seem to have trouble with displaying emotions, and i would have liked an un-broken lemon of the main couple. but those are merely minor things that are totally optional in creating a great story...
Overall, id say im very impressed and totally in love with this story <3

PS, forgive the spelling mistakes, tping is not meant for the dark... (and neither are black keyboards... ^.^)
person wetheril
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely up for a sequel to this story! ^_^ I'd like to see a story that focuses on their family and their children growing up. This has been a most enjoyable read, and one of my favorite mpreg stories.
person Fallen Firefly
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Grabs Laeglass in huge hug* This is such an awesome fic! I LOVE it!!! I was kind of hoping that Randir and Eomer would hook up in Lothlorien! That would have been cool. Anyway, still doesn't change the fact that this fic kicks ass! It's great! You did LOTR lovers a big favor by writing this one!
person BlackDios
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay! all together now!! ... "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!"

X3 I LOVE this story... I truly LOVE this story! with all my heart!! After I read a chappie, I checked every single day, whining and whimpering 'Ahhh! I want to know what's gunna happen next!!' You're story is so beautiful, loving and slightly sad! Everythin in a story I could ever want to read! Mind you.. I usually don't type up reviews this long... ^^; But I truly loved this fanfiction and I cannot tell you ENOUGH of how much I loved it! I thank you for writing this and I thank you even more for posting it! Thank you! Thank you soo much! I love you... X3 <3
person Lilli
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I would like to see a sequl. You left so many questions to me and it is rather disturbing to not to know what happened to the other charecters in this fic.
You really had a good plot and you discribed every detail so well. And I loved the end in chapter twenty-three, Aragorn's words were the best, I can so easily imagine him standing there looking angry and ready to fight for his love. I would have pissed in my pants if I had been Randir at that moment.
I can't think of anything bad to say about this except I would have liked Randir and Legolas to get to know each other better and maybe to become lovers. But I was too late when I found this you had already decided their fate. :(
person Madamdragon
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think a review sounds nice. Loved this one BTW! I would love to see though in the next sequel that their oldest falls in love or something you know...But great job i loved it! read it from begging to end. Write a sequel, Onegai, Ja!
person Madamdragon
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think a review sounds nice. Loved this one BTW! I would love to see though in the next sequel that their oldest falls in love or something you know...But great job i loved it! read it from begging to end. Write a sequel, Onegai, Ja!
person Jean
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story from beginning to end ... a sequel would be fabulous!