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for Sapphire Eyes

by DurOltha

person louise_oblique
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was so so sweet :)


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person louise_oblique
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, but yikkkess on the ending, just a tad difficult. great fic really enjoying it. charcterisations very good

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person orleans
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and I hope you´ll update soon!
Great job!!
person louise_oblique
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol really good

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person jen
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a good story! I really like stories where Legolas is blind, or deaf, or paralyzed, or some such. Don't know why. But this looks to be a good one and I'm looking forward to more. There are a few small typos, like "sent" instead of "scent," "eleth" instead of "elleth," "nerves" instead of "nervous," etc., but it's negligible and easily fixed by a beta reader. Nevermind. Please update soon!
person louise_oblique
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovly really enjoyed it :)

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