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for Smack the Dog

by Foofy

person Sandy Girvan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's incredibly well written and I can't wait for more, please don't stop! You have done an amazing job of characterization not to mention an understanding of the lifestyle, thank you, thank you, thank you! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Sandy
person Juliette
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All caught up with all these lovely chapters now! I still love this story and I still have absolutely no idea of how it is going to end. But can I borrow "your" Wenham? My apartment could use a good cleaning and whatnot. You are quite obviously a very good writer, because you've got me, a straight female, enthralled by a fic where ALL the hot guys in LOTR are gay! (Billy, 'Lij, and Dom, the maybe-straight guys, are very cute but never did anything for me) More soon please!
person lady_void
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! keep writing :-)
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story and I hope you update it soon!
person Ardent Reader
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just came back from vacation to find that you have posted 3 chapters! This story is great. The dialogue in chapter 25 between Sean and Dave is so very well written - clear, simple, no analogies, puns, or too many distractions. Can't wait for chapter 27 and beyond....the mysteries of what happened to Viggo and his old abusive boyfriend and who he recently fought with are keeping me on the edge of my seat. Please...don't....stop. LOL
person deathskiss
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't think ive said this before- but I love this story! Maybe because it's so well written, or maybe because it features some of my favorite men. :) I will keep reading as long as you keep writing.
person Sandy
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**thud** **drool** Wow, this is such a great story, I haven't moved from my lap top since I started reading it! Thank you, More, lol I'm hooked!

Great writing, great expressions. Don't stop now!
person Juliette
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My my my! This story is getting more complicated by the moment. And I admit to having absolutely no clue as to how it's all going to end. I could see it ending happily, I could see it ending in some kind of bizarre murder-suicide (Wenham seems particularly unstable, but then nobody in this story gets the good mental health award.) Please continue ASAP, I love this!

PS--Just wanted to add that as an American, I'm totally enjoying the Britspeak in this fic. I just have to keep reminding myself that when Sean mentions football, it's soccer, not American football.

person Juliette
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All caught up with the new chapters now. Wow, that was some powerful stuff there (as well as some powerfully good smut!) Poor Sean, I kept wincing as I kept reading further along in the scene with Karl and David. Then Viggo finally spilled his horrible little secret. It was worse than I thought it would be. Now I'm wondering with Sean, what *did* Orly do to get Viggo to agree to do bondage after what he'd been through?. I hope you decide to go into a bit more detail about the aftermath of Viggo's rape and torture, as I am really wondering what happened with his boyfriend to make him do that, and if anybody went to jail. Orli has got the pics back? I can't wait to read if Karl really did keep his hands off him the way he promised Sean in return for his compliance. And are the trio planning any revenge on Karl? I kind of hope they are, what he did is too low even for the dogs to bite. He's a good-looking guy who could get practically anybody he wants, and he cooks up a blackmail scheme to entrap two men who don't want any part of him? That's just awful. Just my two cents.
person Juliette
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks! I love Viggo this way, and the Sean POV is great. Please update soon!