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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, they got everything out in the open at last. Will be interesting to see how the story progresses from here. Will Viggo let Karl go without any further retribution, and will Karl show up for any more games? And what about Daisy? Please update soon!
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SOBS Unconsolably at not finding Chapter 31*
So, to console myself, I re-read Chapter 30. A lovely, lovely chapter.
Desperate for more. Please. Please. Please.
So, to console myself, I re-read Chapter 30. A lovely, lovely chapter.
Desperate for more. Please. Please. Please.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, I can't wait to see what they do to Karl ^___^
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, where to begin? At first, I was a little distracted about the changing PoV's but it was simply a matter of getting used to it. Then I thought, there was no way of Orli being submissive like that but well, it fits perfectly by the end of chapter 30.
Have I told you that I was reading Smack the Dog in one day up to chapter 28? It took me from 11am to 2 am, just with the break of a few, very short phone calls. I even forgot to eat. But I simply could not stop.
Anyway, as I have told you, I am very addicted. Got up at 2am last night to look for an update. So please, PLEASE, will you go on and write some more soon? You are killing me!!!!
XOXO Marius
Have I told you that I was reading Smack the Dog in one day up to chapter 28? It took me from 11am to 2 am, just with the break of a few, very short phone calls. I even forgot to eat. But I simply could not stop.
Anyway, as I have told you, I am very addicted. Got up at 2am last night to look for an update. So please, PLEASE, will you go on and write some more soon? You are killing me!!!!
XOXO Marius
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really really really really really really really really really really love this story...I just spend my last 3 days reading it in all the spare time I could find, I can hardly wait for another update
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished your last three chapters. I want to beg you to finish and post chapter 30 as fast as you can, yet don't want to rush you...OH THE PAIN OF WAITING. LOL
Perhaps we can free you up from the dreary chores that clog your day and keep you from writing continuously....how about coming to clean your home? wash the car? walk the dog? shop for your groceries?
Perhaps we can free you up from the dreary chores that clog your day and keep you from writing continuously....how about coming to clean your home? wash the car? walk the dog? shop for your groceries?
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is keeps getting better and better! I can hardly wait to read the next chappy! I am so addicted to your story , that is certifiable! Please, keep writing! Your story rocks!
L'L
L'L
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha, so Mr Urban's joining the group as well, is he? Well, after what just happened you can't blame him. What's Daisy going to say when he finds out? More soon please!
PS--I laughed out loud at the bit about the carol singers.
PS--I laughed out loud at the bit about the carol singers.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!!!!!! You should keep up with the great work!!!!
I can't believe they managed to get Karl into the gym, but they did and that's awesome!
I can't believe they managed to get Karl into the gym, but they did and that's awesome!
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is more twisty and turny than a Slinky, and I love it! Quite enjoyed the interval at the rough bar with the bad hurty men. I still have zero idea where this is going to end up, and I really enjoy that. More soon please!