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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, let's hope the boys are careful with those bad men.... And maybe Orli will help Dave get more comfortable....with his sexuality, that is!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARRGH! Evil Evil cliffie! Get back here and tell us what happened to Daisy!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Chapter 33! Will Karl be back for more? Will Sean finally behave? Will David turn up beaten or will they find him tied up in Sean's apartment? Who knows, but Foofy? Write on, dear! Loving every, single word.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave us hanging here, please update soon I wanna know how it continues :p
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOH MY GODNESS!!!!!! By the Valar, I pray you continue soon. As far as I know you (not that much indeed) I will have to wait a whole week to find out what happened to poor David.
Good job, loved that chapter.
Good job, loved that chapter.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, David Oh mi god, did Karl's guys get David Oh mi god.
Please add another chapter soon! Or I shall die from the suspense.
Oh mi god!!!!!!!!!!
Please add another chapter soon! Or I shall die from the suspense.
Oh mi god!!!!!!!!!!
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! I need MORE, OHMIGOD, how could you have just let the chapter end there, leaving hanging like that? AAAAAH I think I'm going to go insane from wating!! Please ad the next chapter soon or I will go insane!
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And you left it THERE! That last line was *such* a tease! I liked it when Sean smacked Karl around. Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy. Please update soon!
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm you got me a little confuzzled with some of the dialogues, though I still absolutely love it ... I hope for another update soon.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeez, you got me hooked since the first chapter! This is an absolutely fantastic story, love every chapter better.
Just the updates are not fast enough but oh well, that's life. Can't expect you to write 24/7 a day so I am satisfied, or can I? *puppy dog eyes*
Anyway, got a little confused at the end of chapter 32. Who's Sean suppose to take? Karl? Orli? *scratches her head in wonder*
Boy and you got some.. how do I call it in english? change of views? Change of perspectives? But that's just me knitpicking since I started creative writings lessons, never mind! Still love, love, love, really love your story. Keep on going!
Am I allowed to print your story out and make it into a book for myself to read over and over again?
XOXO Jesse
Just the updates are not fast enough but oh well, that's life. Can't expect you to write 24/7 a day so I am satisfied, or can I? *puppy dog eyes*
Anyway, got a little confused at the end of chapter 32. Who's Sean suppose to take? Karl? Orli? *scratches her head in wonder*
Boy and you got some.. how do I call it in english? change of views? Change of perspectives? But that's just me knitpicking since I started creative writings lessons, never mind! Still love, love, love, really love your story. Keep on going!
Am I allowed to print your story out and make it into a book for myself to read over and over again?
XOXO Jesse