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Well, that was an interesting couple of chapters, to say the least! I had to have a bit of a giggle at first at the thought of grown men dressing up weird to go to an orgy. But was smut was totally hot, and I was glad to see Dave and Karl get together right near the end. And I wonder, as ever, what the hell is going on with Viggo. More soon please!

Now that was just mean! You can't just leave it at that! update again soon. Pretty pretty please?

This is the best peice of RPS fiction I have ever read! Amazing, well written and addictive as all hell. I am so happy you have continued on with it, I keep checking each week to see if there are any added chapters. You really capture the charaters well, not to mention erotic, agg a few cold showers have followed reading this, not to mention jumping my husband. You've handled the D/s relationship so well and being in the lifestyle myself I have to applaud you, very loudly I must say, at that fact. Please don't stop now, :)
Sandy G.

That was a really, really great chapter. I always like it when Viggo unbends a little, we readers learn more details and get inside his fascinating head a bit. Hmm, a date with Dave on Saturday? Can't wait to see what happens there!

Hehe, soundtracks for real life? That would be fun! Liked it when Vig grabbed for the hilt of his sword.

Oh and don't worry about being violent. I believe that sometimes everybody likes to see their *heros* being pushed around and get hurt a little. Not much but enough for other people to get worried and have to take care of them. Hmm, at least I hope Viggo will be in the position of taking care of Sean, will he????
Speaking of Viggo. What about my idea to push him over his own limits? Naaah forget it. That would be too much, I guess.

Cya soon, I hope? With another chapter? PLEASE???

Uh-oh, it ain't looking good for our boys right now! Great chapter, I love fights. One of the worst things about having no hockey this year is no hockey fights on tv or live at games. I also like how Viggo unconsciously reached for his sword and how Sean was wishing he had his. Please update soon!

My my, my, poor Daisy! I am curious to see what will happen to my lovely Sean when the guys actually get him in their hands. Kind of. Curious about Vig's reaction IF they try to get to Sean.
LOVE to see a nice barfight, *evil grin*. LOVE to see Viggo unleashed! PLEASE????? *puppy eyes*
Anyway, keep going. Keep going. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Marius

Well this is only the second RPS fic I've ever read, but it's got me hooked! I spent about 5 hours reading the first 28 chapters, and I've been hanging around grabbing every update as soon as it's posted...this is a fantastic story! it continues to surprise me, even after all thes chapters I can't wait to see where it's going. Well done and thankyou! :D

Thank goodness, our Daisy looks like he's going to be okay! You had me worried at the beginning of the chapter. Please update soon, want to know what's going to happen with the bad guys in the bar!

Very nice update :D, can hardly wait for another ;)